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Nice first chapter.
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Thanks! In the process of making chapter 2 now
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Also, I am now your first follower.
Yay!
I like it but it needs more polish. Find yourself a good editor and that will go a long way.
Wow, this is your first story? Awesome.
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Will do
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Yup. Never wrote my own story before. I was actually nervous about posting it, but seeing how much attention this story has gotten is awesome!
Added your story to some groups, hope you don't mind.
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I don't mind at all
A decent concept, but the grammar and execution could use some work. Try not to mix past and present tense, especially.
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Thanks for the feedback I knew I would have a few problems here and there. I'm just surprised that I've gotten as many views and likes as it has
hmm, i like it, really
i need more
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Chapter 2 is in progress and should be finished in a day or 2. Glad you like it!
I hope this story doesn't get abandoned like other great stories out there, I'd hate to see this story be left alone and unfinished.
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Not a chance! I hate leaving things unfinished. And I'm engrossed in this story too much to abandon it
>>AnimeKid22 that's refreshing to hear. To many stories on this site get abandoned. keep up the good work!
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I will And thanks for the positive feedback
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That's how I roll
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And the various sex jokes that will follow
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Duly noted!
TwiDash are my favorite, and you certainly did a good job!
Awaiting more!
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Thank you!
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Starting chapter 3 tomorrow!
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YAY!!
soooooo hyped!
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I'm glad that people like this story so much! I'm having a lot of fun with it. Especially with pinkie pie's scene
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Yeah!
Ohhh I'm so exited!
Almost everypony else on this site would have said "Me and Twi". You deserve a medal for correct grammar.
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Thank you! Being manic, I don't have the best grammar because my brain processes things so fast and I try to do my best with grammar
4590167 Indeed. This is outstanding for a first story.
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Thank you!
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Wait...
THIS WAS YOUR FIRST?
GREAT CELESTIA!
(You have unlocked a new follower: Hardc0r3Br0n3)
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Thanks dude! I have a brain that is constantly thinking and my imagination is constantly working all hours of the day, so I figured I'd make an outlet for all that mess flowing in my brain
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Well thank celestia you did!
Damn dude!
I can't be leave you only have 10 followers!
YOU DESERVE OVER 9000!
My brain... it hurts... so awesome...
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Holy hell. I didn't realize it was that good lol
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Yeah! I thought this was just one of many story's, but a first?! That shocked me... like lightning.
I'm going to HAVE to read this on YouTube... seriously.
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Go for it! That would be cool
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It should be in by next Monday (or this Sunday)
Because my computer broke and doesn't get fixed until then. Also I'm afraid I have to edit out the spike part, my parents don't approve (along with some other stuff)
Sorry.
Well that escalated quickly.
Great chapter though.
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That's cool
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Yay!
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Thanks dude! I honestly have a lot of fun doing this
Update!
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Yes! It would've been finished sooner but I have wifi issues
4622020 Ouch. Then again, my Virgin Media Super (crap) Hub is an embarrassment to all of my tech, such as my DrayTek wireless router and custom-built server. Also, I posted
because I'm happy it updated, not that I'm pushy and want more. Although, that would be great...If you don't mind
New update
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I start planning my next chapter as soon as the one i'm on gets published