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Harmonious Tempest
I have been a fan of the show for a little while now, and have really wanted to add something to the community. This is my first attempt at being a writer, and I have had a lot of fun along the way.
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Frist. Lol and its good but you need some space between paragraphs. All in All It realy good on your frist time.
4888138 Thanks a lot for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed it so far.
Very nice. Twi gave RD a very valuable peice of information, I wonder if she will figure it out?
Wait you might want to replace the word love with lust because from what i can tell rd wants twi for her body unless she has some crush that we don't know about
4897600 or maybe just use the word 'feelings'? i mean, i', sure rainbow has lusted after mares before, but this whole situation is supposed to be about her budding feelings for her friend.
4897867 Well yeah feelings that magically appeared overnight.
4897885 all it takes is a 'spark' to turn simple feelings of companionship, into the smoldering embers of love.
4897893 Well what a wonderful way to get the "spark"
Sarcasm aside I still feel that this love/romance should have started or sparked or whatever in a better way than seeing her friends naked body but hey that's just me.
4897905 well she did say that her date with soarin only confused her. maybe the confusion was on her preferences for a potential special somepony, and seeing twilight like that more or less forced her to evaluate how well she would fit the bill. i mean, it literally said that twilight was everything she would want in a special somepony! so like i said before, spark ignited the flames of love, which was fueled by her friendship building her a solid foundation to start on.
4898450 What I was going for is exactly what BronyPonyMan is saying, Rainbow Dash has always valued Twilight for her intelligence and personality, but only when put into this situation does she make the connection. I am trying to touch on this a little more in the final chapter. This is why I am calling it love.
Well, that escalated quickly. It's a great story, but I thought that it would be a repeat of last night, or something similar. This seems like it happened very quickly. That aside, it's still a good story!
very well done