Rainbow Dash is shocked to discover an upcoming try outs session for the Wonderbolts. Are her dreams going to be crushed by a yellow pegasus? Will she triumph against all odds to achieve her dream and more?'
Back to me...
General plot of the story is a bit of Soarin/Dash shipping with a good dose of drama thrown in throughout the story in the form of Spitfire trying to screw them up for her own nefarious reasons. Throw in a dash of crazy, a touch of romance and a sprinkle of surprises and I think this could turn out well.
Hope you enjoy!
Chapters (11)
Hmm I really like this i give you thumb
you make an interesting read. your style of writing is quite excellent. It's really 'pony like'.
this is a perfect idea for season 3!
532108 to bad the makers of the show cant use it
A Cupcakes reference and not a Pinkie in sight
this fic is weird.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
...I think I can see the events leading up to this...
Spitfire: "Exactly as planned."
corn, corn everywhere theres corn! i lived in iowa for a bit and even the entire corn state has nothing on how much corn there is here! i'm up to my ears in it!!! so cliche that it makes cliche look deviant!
i'm sorry no offense or anything and i dont wanna sound mean or anything its just that this is like the most predictable thing i have ever read and to top it off its not of high quality and the combination of the two makes for lots or CORN which is sad because you put quite a bit of effort into it...
may i suggest you more-or-less rewrite this and have some help from others because the idea is fine and SoarinDash is best ship
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
CURES YOU CURSE YOU (not you story writer just the vague general YOU)
>"Next time I might forgot tat I have rules."
Welp.
@Bashfluff: Thanks for pointing that out. Fixed now.
@TDG: Curse all you want, it can only get better from now right?
soooooo, spitfire goes leabians with RD?
605801 After everything that's happened thus far do ya honestly think that'll happen? More likely Spitfire'll just blame Dashie and do something stupid. Again.
That said, it's nice ta know what happened to get him into that situation. It was... confusing after everything else in this story.
Wish I found this sooner...though now that I've read it I need more.
This is definitely one of the better SoarDash stories, cliche drama included
Hope the next chapter comes soon,
~Your new fan.
DUN DUN DUN!!!
I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE this
I like this story very much. I hope it will be continued because definitely i need more.
Late to the party but up to date! Nao push that writers block out of the way and CONTINUE
please
so..............you no finish this one?
all the other chapter are on fanfiction..why
You're doing a good job of writing Derpy in-character, I think.
So Spitfire is determined to replay "Fatal Attraction", eh?
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Lazy/ want to rewrite some stuff. I'll get around to it eventually.
CUPCAKES
I'm new here so I'm gonna read this story
SoarinxDash
good summary, ok.. so of to a good start.
What am I doing?!? I gotta get reading
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liked it
Good chapter
Liked it
but....
'Let's just see how this pans out, eh?'
Pans I dont know if you ment to write it like that or if its a mistake.
But hey no one is perfect not even me
OMG
Same
DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!
WAIT IS THIS COMPLETE?!?!
This better not end like this
"No I hate him so much that I want to rip his wings off and turn them into baked goods." Dash remarked sarcastically.
"I'd use his legs, more meat on them." Twilight said back, keeping a completely straight face as she did so.
"Ok… That's a bit weird Twilight."
Im with ya there rainbow... im with ya there...
532108 Don't'ya mean Season 4?
2335549 may i get rainbow dash so she can help you there?
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There ya go! :)
1887754 THEY ARE!? Oh god i HAAAVE to find it!!!
So I guess the rest is up to our minds...?
NO YOU SHALL MAKE MORE OF THIS STORY
I mean if you cool with it
No seriously make more
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i know! it is ridiculous. Rather they made this than Equestria Girls
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perhaps... :D
I can't wait for more
im so dissapointed that this is cancelled it was so good
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Why was this cancelled? There are far too few SoarinDash stories around, and this one had a very unique vibe to it that I would have loved to see complete.
~SolidFire
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1: I'm lazy
2: It's finished on Fanfic.net. I can't be bothered bringing it over.
3: I'm lazy
4: I'm lazy
5: I honestly hold little affection for this story.Only reason I don't purge it is because it was my first one and there is some measure of nostalgia.
6: There is no six
7: I'm lazy
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W-what!? Are more likes, favorites, and follows not worth the tiny bit of work to copy-paste a story from another site over to here? It's a shame that you don't hold much to this story, especially since it would shape up to be one of your stories that I like the most.
~SolidFire
AWW HEEEEEELLL NAW!
OH HEEEEEELLLLLLLL NO, SPITTY!!! U DID NOT JUST-
This story is great at least your story doesn't go from hi to love within 1 short page and your story has details about how they met and fell in love I Love your story
Plz add another chapter to this story?
This is an epic story and it just dosnt feel right for it not to have another chapter:twilight oops:
But yeah Epic story!
SILVER!!!!
*gets into Jaeger called Elemental Steike and points plasma cannons at Silver!*
SPITFIRE!!!!! YOU WILL BURN IN HELL AND I WILL PERSONALLY SEND YOU THERE!!!!!
3960870 Oh buck.
4408215 You had to say my line.