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A crossover between the Halo/Pony universes. It is centered around Richard B-294, a Spartan III part of a secretive Headhunter team; consisting of two men who often go on suicide missions into enemy territory. Richard is separated from his partner in an accident he can't remember and awakes in a strange ocean. Not knowing where he is he must survive using only his wits, weaponry, and help from candy-colored horses.

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Chapters (8)
Comments ( 78 )

Pretty good fi-wait....*looks up at advertisment*Holy irony its a Halo Ad.....

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I got a My Little Pony ad. Looks like we have a complete pair between us!
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

VX

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guess what add i have.......you guessed it! A WORLD OF WARCRAFT ADD FTW :rainbowlaugh:

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I would say that's silly but... it is. Oh my Glob I just got a WoW add too!:unsuresweetie:
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

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I got google chromebook...I got nothing funny to say.
Also, a great fic.

none of you have adblock? wow. btw great story i want more plz:moustache:

Yes.... I see that you can keep this exiting.... Please let us know if Redheart survived.

way too short...i love it though
MOAR:moustache:

Awwww... All I have is a stupid egg ad. ):

Hmmm what shall happen next I wonder

Ps typed from iPod

I look forward to the next chapter!
I think I'll actually try NOT reading it when it comes out, though... Maybe I'll wait for two or three more to come out before reading again. (They're, uh... Just a tiny bit short.)

WAY too short......I LOVE THIS :moustache:

They are quite short but still awesome!!

well i dont mind it being short lets him make them faster as well as reduced typos

Guys I realize the chapters have been short, and I'm trying to fix the problem. I've just been pushing them out as fast as I can (takes me 20 minutes to write, coming up with the story line as I go along). I'm working on a longer one right now, 2,000 words or so. So please be patient and thanks for reading!
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

They may be short but they are awesome and full of potential, and a bit of advice I would give is to combine short chapters into one larger chapter or something, helps me when I do research essays for school and stuff, dunno about fanfics but I think it would work :scootangel:

P.S.: This story is awesome and you should feel awesome. :rainbowkiss:

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Well, don't rush it too much, of course. True works of art usually take their time to come out perfect and refined.

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

I have the next chapter close to completed, but... My proofreader won't be available for today, her input greatly improves my work; as well as her fixing my grammatical errors. So it will be out either tommorow or Monday.
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

ill put this on my read later and about around thursday i will read it and there should be more, hopefully

A phantom is here?
Ah, horseapples, this ain't gonna end well...

Confound it, Lyra, what is your major malfunction?
Detachable hands... :facehoof:

This is the... rather un-edited, version. Within the week I'll have the next chapter and this one *fixed* and uploaded.
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

longer chapters please. MOAR!:pinkiegasp:

I think this story will turned out to be good, you put a lot of efforts to it!

Another... un-edited version of a Chapter, good proofreaders are too darn lazy! Also, exams are brutal and I've been studying nonstop, of course by studying I mean procrastinating, but hey? Chapter is out and it's the biggest to date, Like a Boss.
(Edit)
Not the biggest, Reprisals from Ponies still holds it...
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

more I want more! your story is very interesting but it's too short.

i need more story:twilightsmile:

"Hmmm..."
*looks over chapter and give a nod of aproval
:moustache: "Good sir. Please continue."

If you're looking for a good/ok proofreader, i might be able to help. As long as you dont mind waiting till' i get back from school (3:25ish in the afternoon, US eastern) then i can proofread for you. And as always, great chapter, and one hell of a bugger of a cliffhanger... Why is it always a cliffhanger...

I don't think I can scream "MOAR!!!!!!!" loud enough to convey my feelings on the matter,.

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I'm trying to increase the chapter length alot, the problem is that is seems so big before I upload it.... then it's so small...
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

IDEAS REQUESTED!
I have a general idea on where I'm going with this but I still need to know what will cover the one/two chapters in between!
I will accept any ideas (within reason) and incorporate them as best I can in the story.
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

So instead of being obsessed with Humans in this reality, Lyra is obsessed with Forerunners? :rainbowhuh:

WHAT A TWISST!!!

uhhhhhhhhhh how does she know .................... nevermind we will find out later

Uh...
Why try to kill him then?
I r confused.
By the way, her behavior is quite crazy indeed... did a monitor upload its intelligence to a pony body and go through madness from too many years of monitoring?

.............WHAT!?!?!

I THOUGHT IT WAS ABOUT THE HANDS :raritydespair:

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She wasn't trying to kill him. She was trying to knock him out, like Richard was trying to do with her.

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But one cannot reclaim whilst unconscious!!!
LOGIC.EXE HAS ENCOUNTERED A PROBLEM AND NEEDS TO CLOSE
SOMEPONY WHO CARES IS SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE
*beep, beep*
*beep*
*beep*
...
*beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*

Welcome to the world of ponies, please check you logic at the door. It will never, ever be returned to you.

YOU BASTARD! I was going to use that in MY story! :fluttershysad::applecry:

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Sorry man, beat you to the mark.
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

602181 Sonofabitch
I'll think of something else

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Spartan III's weigh less than a Spartan II. Meaning that their "normal" 2 ton weight would be reduced to around a fraction of that, also the weight would lessen because he isn't wearing Mjolnir armor, but cut-down SPI armor like the kind they wear in "Ghosts of Onyx"
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Bronies came up with it because one of Lyra's fandom aspects is an obsession with hands, translating to fic writers "She knows about humans because she knows about hands". It's just a silly thing made up by us bronies, because we are silly people.
(Nurse Redheart is truly the cutest and most bestest pony)

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