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Caught Off Guard

A Galactic Federation Elite Trooper is flying to his next mission.
He gets hit by an asteroid and crash-lands on a strange planet.
He meets some strange quadrupedal creatures after crashing.
They assume he is hostile, he wants to find some information.
Hilarity ensues.
(Crossover with the Metroid universe, rated Teen for naughty language)
[BEING RE-WRITTEN]

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ghostlywolf

ghostlywolf #1 · Jun 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Crash Landing ·

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pretty good easy to read no grammer errors so far not that i can see but im not the highest mark in my class so ya

1234QQQQ

1234QQQQ #2 · Jun 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1: Crash Landing ·

Good so far but longer chapters would be nice.

NightmareKnight

NightmareKnight #3 · Jun 24th, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter 1: Crash Landing ·

Sooooo... the ponies automatically assume he's dangerous based on the word of three fillies who have been known to exaggerate and lie. And when he acts in self defense, they get angrier. They're basically saying "How dare you fight back, now take an extra beating!"

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