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It is in the moment of our greatest need that we become the most susceptible to change. But sometimes, what you have to offer, might not be enough, even if you are a princess who has seen more suffering than any other pony in this world.
When a young life is in danger, it is up to Luna and Rainbow to help overcome what is the result of their own shortcomings.
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Another amazing story. Glad to have you back in action, Tad.
Too beautiful for words.
Great story!
This is the perfect song to listen to for this story. This brought so many feels... This whole story actually happened to my friend but he survived and omg im just fucking crying right now. Anyway, this was a great one, liking and faving cuz you deserve it, man.
Love it and very sad
Wonderful story! Lots of feels man, I just wish it could have included the note.
Wow.
Damnit...
Had to go and make me eat major FEELS for breakfast didn't you?
Also 4457497 good to see we frequent the same authors
Congrats on making the Popular Box!
one i friggin hate scootaloo
two i friggin hate rainbow dash
and three screw you for writing this well enough for me to have been rooting for both of them.
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...I am... sorry?
Glad you liked it.
Thank you all for the great reception so far! It makes me truely happy.
Seemed interesting so far
Congrats on thos story so far. Not a single downvote! Eeven the trolls cant bring themselves to down this :)
All aboard the feels train! Choo Choo!
4458703 no the dead island theme goes with because dead island makes everything sad.but I do hope he writes more of this story and ends it with a HAPPY ending.
A perfect story doesnt need any more words than this: Thank you for this wonderful and rather beautiful story. You made me tear up and it was worth favouriting and in reading all your other stuff.
Wow...
-Frost
This is an awesome fic! I love it.
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-arcum42
This is an amazing story, even if it's a bit darker than I normally go. Only criticism I have is that Scootaloo was a bit too well spoken.
I have mixed feelings regarding this story. You abuse adverbs like crazy and it was intensely distracting. A few of the sentences were clunky and unclear and forced me to pause and re-read them to get what was intended. Also, I scoff at the idea that Luna visits every pony in their dreams right before death; that's at least thousands of ponies every night, if not tens of thousands. How does she find time to see all of them and do everything else she's supposed to be doing for her job?
Then there was Scootaloo herself, her dialogue feeling awkward and very OOC. Even considering she's on death's door from an attempted suicide, her voice just didn't feel right at all. Rainbow still felt like Rainbow, Luna still felt like Luna, but Scootaloo didn't feel like Scootaloo. For that alone, the first half or so of this story just wasn't having much of an impact on me. Top all that off with the knowledge that this is another of the kajillion 'sad Scootaloo' fics out there and I was a little disappointed.
Despite all of these issues, I still enjoyed the story. It could have had a better delivery, but for what it was I'm more than willing to accept it. I may just peruse your other material to see how they fare against this.
I was devastated by this story. I want revenge on scoots' parents, so bad.
Damn, that was intense. Nicely done.
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Huzzah! Because of your comment, (and the terrible spelling in it), someone downvoted this story!
And what's up with not using a site-provided emoticon?
Tricky to rate, this one. I loved the first part, with the whole dream thing working superbly well. I wasn't so keen on the second part, as the reason for Scoots' problems didn't quite convince and the resolution felt a bit easy. Still a like, though.
This was so sad and beautiful... All of my favorite ponies in one story *sniffle*
I-I'd like a sequel to this, it's alright if you don't make one but just a suggestion.
But not beyond Cadence's abilities!
Dude, extreme emotions! Would now like a Rainbow-Luna pair from that vibe. Lovely story.
Today's a Good Day to Cry Hard it seems.