<

DeiStar

Joined April 2012
1,016 followers

DeiStar

Stories (17)

  • Rarity's Bad Mane Day
    Sweetie Belle pulls a prank on Rarity, dying her mane green.

    7,007 words · 11,316 views · 802 likes · 18 dislikes
  • In My Life
    Celestia speaks about her life with Twilight in the hospital
    1,732 words · 8,770 views · 872 likes · 25 dislikes
  • I Feel Fine
    Rarity is sick, so Applejack goes over to take care of her.
    4,522 words · 5,540 views · 452 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Honey Pie
    While on a picnic, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle share a delicious honey pie. Soon, they find each other talking about something they never thought they would talk about. Foalhood is like honey pie.
    4,253 words · 3,041 views · 307 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Journey to My Imagination
    94,438 words · 21,976 views · 2,099 likes · 107 dislikes
  • She Came In Through the Bathroom Window
    7,112 words · 11,670 views · 925 likes · 43 dislikes
  • Tomorrow Never Knows
    4,699 words · 2,669 views · 311 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Lyra Heartstrings: Ace Attorney
    16,621 words · 2,745 views · 202 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Sister Love
    6,531 words · 8,927 views · 648 likes · 37 dislikes
  • Mistress Twilight
    3,755 words · 16,202 views · 921 likes · 57 dislikes

Blog Posts (62)


Don't expect quality from this fic.

Being a creator means creating your own world, where you pour your love and heart into it.

In a stormy night, after a strange event in her office, Lauren Faust gets teleported into the magical land of Equestria. The land... that she created. What will she do now? How will she return to the reality from her own imagination? Will she even be willing to leave?

First Published
6th Apr 2012
Last Modified
15th Nov 2012

Comments ( 2,822 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

HMMMMM how the hell didn't any body else think of this

Now i want moar

#2 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

I have been waiting for someone to do this for ages.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

1st time I've read a Lauren faust story....continue

#5 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

SON OF A BITCH, ANOTHER IDEA WRITTEN BEFORE I COULD!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: It's official, the government implanted a chip inside my brain and EVERYTIME a good idea comes into my head, an author steals it and writes it down in FIMFiction, and no, I am not in denial and making up random conspiracies to comfort myself:pinkiecrazy:

None of my ideas are sacred:raritydespair::raritycry::fluttershbad::applecry:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

>>415620

And we would like to thank you for all those delicious little ideas, too. :trollestia:

#7 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

Thanks, everyone

#8 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

A fascinating concept! In all my years of reading fanfiction, I've yet to come across one where the writer of the story itself finds themselves within the world of their creation (though I'm sure they exist). Considering the self insert nature of the community of ponydom, this fits just right. You're off to an excellent start, I'll be looking forward to how you execute this.

My favorite part was: "Lauren was just listening to her long introduction, every word Twilight said, she already knew, she knew better than anyone who Twilight Sparkle was, but she kept on listening." since it got me thinking of so many routes you can take this kind of story that will be great. For instance, will all the characters be exactly as she expects them to be all the time, thus leaving her wondering if she's in some kind of askew mental state, or perhaps they'll have a life of their own, being truly flushed out individuals "off camera" that she may not have explored while considering episodic character development, leaving her wondering the multitude of existential concepts that will come into play there.

Haha, as you can see, I'm very excited with the possibilities here. Even if it's just a random romp in Equestria, without overly heavy questions, it should be fun to read. Bravo to your creativity! :rainbowlaugh:

Fin
#9 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

Am I the only one who thinks Lauren should get her own character tag?

I'm so tracking this.

                                                            -Fin

#10 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

>>415664 Sadly on her dA page she said she doesn't read fics :applecry: but if somehow we can get her over...:pinkiecrazy:

#11 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

Lauren is best pony :pinkiehappy:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 4d ago · · ·

>>415620

Same here.

Good story.:trollestia:

Good day.:moustache:

#13 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

SHEER GENIUS! MOAR MOAR MOARRRRRR! :flutterrage:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

You sir, get an an internet. :pinkiehappy:

#15 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Hmm I need to read this but i'm getting swamped under the avalanche of my unread fanfics. Later but looks good. :pinkiehappy:

#16 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Holy Epona, Laurel, Her Faustness.... While this is not the first time I have seen someone bring Lauren Faust into a fic, but this is the first I have seen that has her dropped into Equestria and turned into her Alicorn-self. Please continue this, please.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,

Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

#17 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Nope.. there is no way this is your first fan-fic. Too well written to be a first.

Very good story and character portrayal. Keep up the good work and put out the next chapters as fast as possible. I can't wait to continue reading.

10/10

#18 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>415620 Your comment made me lol so hard.

#19 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Can I say I worship you know for doing a Lauren Faust the Alicorn story?

#20 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

edit

#21 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

so who is the idiot to give this a thumbs down? Also, why didn't someone think of something so simple like this before? I guess it's just that you put it more nicely than others.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh son of a... I swear I was going to write this, but no. You have to go and do it first, and probably better than I would have.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

You my friend, will be the first person i've tracked... Ever!

:justsayian:

#24 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

*reads the short description*

*hits the green like button*

*goes to read*

#25 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Lauren in her own creation of the reincarnation. Must see where this goes.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Wait, I'm a bit confused.

I know you added this but someone help me out here.

Is she the Lauren Faust Alicorn from the cover picture, or a younger version?

Sorry for asking.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Why didn't anyone think about this sooner??? *regrets*

Oh well it's really good anyway. Can't wait for next chapter!

#28 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>417206

It's supposed to be the Lauren Alicorn from the cover (her OC), but I didn't want to make her Celestia-size, so I made her normal-size for a better story adaption.

#29 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>417225 Nuts, I can't wait to see what happens when Celestia and Luna hear about this.

#30 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Come with me, annd you'll see! A world, of pure imagination! What you'll see, will defy, expanaaatioooonnn! Prps to anyone who gets the referance

#31 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

This pleases me.:moustache:

#32 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Lauren needs her own story tag. Should she get seperate ones for Human Lauren and Alicorn Lauren, or just one for both of them?

#33 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>417236

My prediction.

"MOM! You came to visit! Come in, come in, how was the trip? Can we get you anything?"

#34 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

trololololol:pinkiehappy:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>417324 I don't think I would be able to make it through the chapter if I see that line.

Because I'll be busy laughing.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

I like it :o

#38 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Would you care to have a skype fan fiction reading of your book, i would love to put it on youtube to help it rise it popularity:twilightsmile:

#39 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Oooo! I can't say I've thought of this before - but I'm glad you did! This is turning out to be an interesting plot, I hope you can write this amazingly. :pinkiegasp:

There's one or two spelling/wording errors in the beginning, but other than that I love this! Bookmarked!

#40 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

It's a very good start to this story and I hope to see the next part soon

#41 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

This. Will. Be. AWESOME!

#42 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Theres no need to put quotation marks around thoughts.  I can't tell if she's saying it or thinking, it's better to just use the italics and get rid of all the "she thoughts"  

And this seems as though it's just going to turn out as another "human in Equestria" story, but as a pony.  

The writing isn't bad, but isn't good.  And it's going to take a lot to actually bring the story somewhere.  

good luck.

#43 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

>>417397

Yep, sorry about that

My main language is not English, but I think I did the best I could.

I'll try to have less grammar errors in the future.

Also, if you'd be so kind to point out the grammar errors, I'll be glad to fix them right away.

#44 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore :raritystarry:

I am eagerly waiting for the rest of this :pinkiehappy:

#45 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I like it :twilightsmile:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

''princess celestia and princess luna are the only alicorns?''

Cadence is not amused.

I like it though :P

watching it...

#47 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Let's see where this goes.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Coudn't read this to the end. Too many errors in sentence struckture etc., hurting my readflow. And if I notice this, it means it's really bad. :facehoof:

#49 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

I LIKE IT!

Yeah there's some grammar and sentence structure error, but hey this is a fanatic site, expecting  perfect grammar here is pretty much a exercise in futility. :derpytongue2:

#50 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

You keep mixing up "in" and "on" and it's far too short. But very nice. :pinkiesmile:

0 19282 168463
Login or register to comment