HMMMMM how the hell didn't any body else think of this

Now i want moar

I have been waiting for someone to do this for ages.

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Of this

-The Doctor

1st time I've read a Lauren faust story....continue

SON OF A BITCH, ANOTHER IDEA WRITTEN BEFORE I COULD! It's official, the government implanted a chip inside my brain and EVERYTIME a good idea comes into my head, an author steals it and writes it down in FIMFiction, and no, I am not in denial and making up random conspiracies to comfort myself

None of my ideas are sacred

>>415620415620

And we would like to thank you for all those delicious little ideas, too.

Thanks, everypone for your positive answers!

This is the very first fic I've written, and seems to be doing great!

A fascinating concept! In all my years of reading fanfiction, I've yet to come across one where the writer of the story itself finds themselves within the world of their creation (though I'm sure they exist). Considering the self insert nature of the community of ponydom, this fits just right. You're off to an excellent start, I'll be looking forward to how you execute this.

My favorite part was: "Lauren was just listening to her long introduction, every word Twilight said, she already knew, she knew better than anyone who Twilight Sparkle was, but she kept on listening." since it got me thinking of so many routes you can take this kind of story that will be great. For instance, will all the characters be exactly as she expects them to be all the time, thus leaving her wondering if she's in some kind of askew mental state, or perhaps they'll have a life of their own, being truly flushed out individuals "off camera" that she may not have explored while considering episodic character development, leaving her wondering the multitude of existential concepts that will come into play there.

Haha, as you can see, I'm very excited with the possibilities here. Even if it's just a random romp in Equestria, without overly heavy questions, it should be fun to read. Bravo to your creativity!

Am I the only one who thinks Lauren should get her own character tag?

I'm so tracking this.

                                                            -Fin

>>415664415664 Sadly on her dA page she said she doesn't read fics but if somehow we can get her over...

Lauren is best pony

>>415620415620

Same here.

Good story.

Good day.

SHEER GENIUS! MOAR MOAR MOARRRRRR!

You sir, get an an internet.

Hmm I need to read this but i'm getting swamped under the avalanche of my unread fanfics. Later but looks good.

Holy Epona, Laurel, Her Faustness.... While this is not the first time I have seen someone bring Lauren Faust into a fic, but this is the first I have seen that has her dropped into Equestria and turned into her Alicorn-self. Please continue this, please.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,

Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

Nope.. there is no way this is your first fan-fic. Too well written to be a first.

Very good story and character portrayal. Keep up the good work and put out the next chapters as fast as possible. I can't wait to continue reading.

10/10

>>415620415620 Your comment made me lol so hard.

Can I say I worship you know for doing a Lauren Faust the Alicorn story?

Thanks again everypony, for the feedback!

Well, this is the first fic I ever publish here, but I'm not that great of a writer, I have to give some credit to my pre-reader.

I'll try to get started with the first chapter now! Thanks to you all, this fic seems to have a good future.

so who is the idiot to give this a thumbs down? Also, why didn't someone think of something so simple like this before? I guess it's just that you put it more nicely than others.

Oh son of a... I swear I was going to write this, but no. You have to go and do it first, and probably better than I would have.

You my friend, will be the first person i've tracked... Ever!

:justsayian:

*reads the short description*

*hits the green like button*

*goes to read*

Lauren in her own creation of the reincarnation. Must see where this goes.

Wait, I'm a bit confused.

I know you added this but someone help me out here.

Is she the Lauren Faust Alicorn from the cover picture, or a younger version?

Sorry for asking.

Why didn't anyone think about this sooner??? *regrets*

Oh well it's really good anyway. Can't wait for next chapter!

>>417206417206

It's supposed to be the Lauren Alicorn from the cover (her OC), but I didn't want to make her Celestia-size, so I made her normal-size for a better story adaption.

>>417225417225 Nuts, I can't wait to see what happens when Celestia and Luna hear about this.

Come with me, annd you'll see! A world, of pure imagination! What you'll see, will defy, expanaaatioooonnn! Prps to anyone who gets the referance

This pleases me.

Lauren needs her own story tag. Should she get seperate ones for Human Lauren and Alicorn Lauren, or just one for both of them?

>>417236417236

My prediction.

"MOM! You came to visit! Come in, come in, how was the trip? Can we get you anything?"

trololololol

>>417324417324 I don't think I would be able to make it through the chapter if I see that line.

Because I'll be busy laughing.

>>415582415582

Why u no gif?

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I like it :o

Would you care to have a skype fan fiction reading of your book, i would love to put it on youtube to help it rise it popularity

Oooo! I can't say I've thought of this before - but I'm glad you did! This is turning out to be an interesting plot, I hope you can write this amazingly.

There's one or two spelling/wording errors in the beginning, but other than that I love this! Bookmarked!

It's a very good start to this story and I hope to see the next part soon

This. Will. Be. AWESOME!

Theres no need to put quotation marks around thoughts.  I can't tell if she's saying it or thinking, it's better to just use the italics and get rid of all the "she thoughts"  

And this seems as though it's just going to turn out as another "human in Equestria" story, but as a pony.  

The writing isn't bad, but isn't good.  And it's going to take a lot to actually bring the story somewhere.  

good luck.

>>417397417397

Yep, sorry about that

My main language is not English, but I think I did the best I could.

I'll try to have less grammar errors in the future.

Also, if you'd be so kind to point out the grammar errors, I'll be glad to fix them right away.

Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore

I am eagerly waiting for the rest of this

There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I like it

''princess celestia and princess luna are the only alicorns?''

Cadence is not amused.

I like it though :P

watching it...

Let's see where this goes.

Coudn't read this to the end. Too many errors in sentence struckture etc., hurting my readflow. And if I notice this, it means it's really bad.

I LIKE IT!

Yeah there's some grammar and sentence structure error, but hey this is a fanatic site, expecting  perfect grammar here is pretty much a exercise in futility.

You keep mixing up "in" and "on" and it's far too short. But very nice.

>>417759417759

You're right, I corrected the wrong "in's" and replaced them with some "at's" and "on's".

Thanks for pointing that out.

>>415797415797 I think she said she goes on 4chan.

Wait!

What if the author is actually

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Lauren is disguise?

>>417310417310 clever of you, finding fitting lyrics from the original Wonka movie

>>417310417310 It's Willy Wonka and the chocolate factory 1971

for the love of god update and update fast

Interesting... interesting...

By the way, if anyone with an excellent English wants to be a pre-reader, feel free to PM me.

Please, only do if you're confident that your grammar is excellent. I'd really love some help.

YES!!!!! Finally! Someone did this!

>>417793417793

Dude...(Or Dudette...) That would be interesting...

*Goes of to Ponder the presented situation*

>>415582415582 If Chuck Norris approves, then Heavy MUST read this new story! Onward, Sandvich!

Edit: Take my like dear sir or madam.

YOU STOLE MY IDEA!

no, just kidding, you came up with it first.

Very good idea, and nice work!

although the formatting could be better, i will be stalking this story.

Checks story status.

*Incomplete*

Voice inside head: There will be more.

*Favorite*

>>418305418305

Oh you bet, There will be more.

....oh please, not another 'Lauren Faust goes into Equestria' fic... I can't stand these things. Why is it always Lauren Faust? She didn't create the world. At least not single handedly. There's the creators of the originally series for the idea... the rest of the crew that wrote it... and besides that, I can't stand that Lauren Faust left us, still mad at her about that... I'll refrain from thumbs-downing, as hard as it is... the story may be of great merit, although I can't stand to read a word of it... IDEA! I'll have to make an anti-Lauren Faust Goes Into Equestria story! one of the other writers or something... hmmm...

>>4173641736

Because, I could not find it.

Thanks for posting that though, now I haz gif.

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-The Doctor

It will be interesting if both Celestia and Luna recognize Lauren as their mother even despite her size...

Hi girls, I just want to present you a new friend, Girls, this is Lauren, Lauren those are my Best friends in the world!

Lauren: Humm... Hi?

Well Howdy Miss Lauren I'm Applejack and is a pleasure to... meet.... y-you! *bows down in high respect, the same reaction that would be expected if Celestia where in front of anypony*

O-oh... umm...*sqweak* *does the same as Applejack*

Hi girls how are you doing in... th-this... evening... PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR MY UNCULT BEHAVIOR AND INTRUTION YOUR HIGHNESS *starts to do the same as Applejack, althought more franticaly and desperated*

T-twi-twilight... d-do you know who this pony actually is... PLEASE FORGIVE YOUR HIGNESS! *bows down like everypony exept Twilight and Pinkie to Lauren... althought more ackwardly than Rarity*

TWILIGHT!, AND YOU CALL YOUSELF PRINCESS CELESTIA'S PERSONAL STUDENT!?, that mare over there is none other than her royal highness QUEEN LAUREN FAUST, mother of PRINCESS CELESTIA FAUST, AND LUNA FAUST!, CREATOR ALL EXISTENCES ITSELF!, Your highness, your faitfuly loyal sevant has been keeping her assigned duty as the guadian of chaos, randomness, and dimensions as you ordered her long ago, unfortuately, the rebel Discord stole half of her powers away from her!  *Bows down but in a way more errie of a royal personal guard rather than a regular pony*

404 ERROR: BRAIN NOT FOUND... 7w1L16h7_S94RKL3.exe has commited an ilegal operation, the problem itself relies on S4n1Ty.cmd and L0G1c.cmd are not found... the system will reset inmediatly, if the problem continues please contact support or try to re-install the Operative System...

(Shocked): M-mother?!... I-is that you? *borderline to tears*

Luna: M-momy?!.... MOMMY!, MOMMY! *rush to lauren while in tears*

>>418369418369

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Featured. Well done author.

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Need I say more?

>>418444418444 nope.testa NOPE.bigmac

IT'S PONYTIME!

Oh my God how come no one ever thought of doing a story like this?

This is going to be a GREAT story. I can feel it!

I wonder how Lauren will do in this story, since she is being surrounded by her creations. And she literally created their ENTIRE WORLD.

Someone please send this to Hasbro we need them to know how much we love Lauren Faust.

And while we're at it send this to Lauren herself.

P.S. Make sure this lasts a long time, this will be SO AWSOME LIKE A FAUST!

>>415797415797 It isn't legally possible for her to. Read her profile's Q&A. None of the creators are allowed.

>>417453417453

I have to agree with this assessment.  While it is a very unique story idea, there were plenty of mistakes that should be corrected and learned from before continuing on.  I do look forward to your next chapter, but hope you put a little more time into editing it.

>>418940418940

Thanks for your comment, I'd really appreciate if you were so kind to point out some of my mistakes either here or in a PM, so I can fix them and try not to commit them again in the next chapter.

Love it! You got yourself a tracker

WTF!? C'MON!! I JUST HAD THE SAME IDEA AND SOMEONE ELSE WROTE IT!! PROBABLY BETTER THAN MINE TOO!!! *Cocks gun* FUCK TIS SHIT! *Pulls trigger* -DEAD-

THE END

>>415797415797

Post the link on her dA

>>418443418443

This looks interesting, I will keep an eye on this, but I swear to Celestia, if you star to ship Twilight/Lauren, I and my pony counterpart Dusk will hunt you down.

>>419086419086

If I had planned any shipping, there would be a Romance tag, so do not fear, this is just a comedy fic, rated E for Everypony.

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

Write more!

HERY DERPY SIR!

translates: Awesome story Sir!

Interesting, someone used an idea that I was going us. Really, I'm not mad, because I feel uncomfortable writing fanfic's with real people. I also think it is considered borderline illegal, more so than fanfic's itself.

>>415620415620

I FEEL THY PAIN GOOD BRONY!

Although its done well in my opinion so i applaud the story~ :D

I will proceed to delete my half baked fic.

Not something worth though, I need to do some practice before attempting again.

Sill in my userpage, if you want to see how bad it is.

>>417683417683

sorry, couldnt read your comment to the end. you might want to consider fixing your gramatical structure*

>Trollface

I have no idea what came over me, but i had to do that... While I'm here - which never happens by the way - I'll herpderp a reviewthing

The biggest problem I noticed was the whole quoted thoughts thing, which I'm not going to deal with if it persists. Aside from that; I've seen worse fics, probably some better ones -- not that you can really judge a fic only one chapter into it -- and the concept is a possibly interesting spin on the overused human in equestria concept.

That's all I have to say /Portal2.Turret!different

>raegquit

How'd I guess that this was going to happen? Oh, of course. The Rules of the Internets say so. Observe.

Internet Rule 50: Every franchise will eventually have a crossover with every other franchise in some form. In other words, if it hasn't happened yet, someone's probably working on it now.

Rule 50 also includes Real Life, for those of you who don't know. We're actually just a book in another universe, or something or other...

Well, better hope Faust herself approves of this. fire-flye.deviantart.dom

Okay all, prediction time!

I say Lauren will have the ability to manipulate reality by writing it down.

Example.

"Lauren glanced around nervously and slipped behind a bush, hurredly levitating parchment and a quill from her bag. As quickly as she could while still keeping it readable she scribbles a few lines. "Just then, Rarity saw Rainbow Dash with her mane even messier than usual. Unable to take this crime against fabulosity, she pounced upon the prismatic pony and dragged her into her boutique, ignoring her protests, and conveniently forgetting all about the alicorn she had been chasing all over Ponyville for the past several hours in an attempt to get her measurements for the perfect outfit."

Lauren closed her eyes and waited for several seconds, bracing herself just in case, but upon reopening her eyes, breathed a sigh of relief as she spotted the local Fashionista dragging her friend into the building, dispite Rainbow's expression of horror and her begging for mercy."

>>419581419581

Uh... I never had that in mind.

But who knows, might happen something similar to that

FINALLY!

You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this kind of story to pop up!

ALL OF MY YAYS!

The cutie mark is off but someone did a 'normal' sized pic of her. Link

The description is what really drew me in. You have really captured what it means to be a writer. I commend you sir.

This story is so worth tracking and reading.

>>419581419581 You sir, have a verry valid point with this, even I think this can go along with my own prediction previously posted >>418443418443

Want to bet how epic this will be once the Royal sisters get a word of Lauren's arrival?

Also, Prediction to your prediction(predicception!):

... and then, just then Lauren began to grasp and land into her mind the actual proportions of her own powers as an allicorn, with that in mind she coudn't help to smile a little bit and say once again the very same words that acknowlodged her survey to the verry fist bronies of 4Chan...

"DANCE PUPETS, DANCE!"

>>419086419086 My mission has been successfully completed

>>417310417310 Before reading it, that's what I thought of.

Great story, please continue.

i normally dont rate things until the second chapter, but im making an exception. good idea you have here

>>418531418531 looks like someone's a fan of sequelitis!