The Mane six's younger foals and the CMC's foals decided to be the next Cutie Mark Crusaders
Heres a better coverart :). This was made by 2fab4u. And I could use some coverart for Cutie Mark Crush-saders too if your interested.
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Rose Quartz
My favorite characters on the show are Applejack, Rarity. And my favorite episodes are Sweet and Elite, and Rarity takes Manehatten. And I want my stories to be famous like Cupcakes and Bubbles.
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There not all boring as some are funny.
4440669 Thanks
the chapters are not boring some are funny and i like the cover art for this story
4440694 Thanx
I love this story already
4440770 YAY XD :D
4440752 your welcome
I wanna draw a cover art for you, but I'm not sure because I'm lazy
4441053 You can if you want, and it's ok to be lazy. Im lazy too LOL
4441184 Okay I might idk
are you going to make a story in future of the CMC when they were little fell in love and how they had they kids because i want to know how that happen
4441430 Probably not
4441437 ok and i still like this story
I only ship Rainbow Dash x Soarin, Applejack x Caramel, and I sorta ship Fluttermac.
Also, you have some grammatical errors that you should get fixed e.g. the comma goes before the quotation marks, not after, and if you put a question mark, no comma is necessary. There's also some missing commas in some places.
I just finished the chapters so far, and wow, this story is great! I can't wait for more. I'm also really excited to find out who "she" is.
YAY NEW CHAPTER!!!!!
Great! I LOVE it!
Perfect way to start school. I loved it, thumps up!
hey there is no need to be sorry for the long chapter because i like this long chapter
This confulzzles me
4445254 wHY
OMG IT'S 2 "R'S". ONE "R" MEANS RAPE AS IN SEXUAL ABUSE!!
Also, this wasn't even that long of a chapter, so don't apologize! 10,000 chapters is long! This was great!
4448035 Oh whoops I meant Rapping, I always get that confused
Interesting, a nice way to help littli Sweets. Cute
Yay! I love this chapter!
New pic? Nice, i can fully imagine your ponies now! Yay!
Chose which ever one yo like best, if the person os upset just say theirs was great too.
The sentence doesn't exactly make sense.
'The next day, the crusaders walked to the schoolyard' would have made a bit more sense.
4457856 Thanks and whoops
You could choose the other coverart if you like.
Great chapter btw
Omg awesome!
4463753 Thanx
Yay! I wonder what Rainbow Dash would think of her son being an egghead.
4468675 I think she would say "Huh, IRONY" besides shes an egghead too
4468706 Omg, that's true.
Eggheads 4 lyf!!!
Omg no I ruined it
4469024 ruined what?
4470766 Ruined my first comment with my stupidness.
4471586 oh... now i feel stupid...
4471968 Omg no, I'm the stupid one. I said "stupidness" instead of "stupidity".
4471990 no, im the supidest pony there is! if im not then all the 300+ people on my scool must be wrong, and that is nearly inpossible!
4472040 Omg, so they call you stupid? They call me smart, but I'm not, haha
4472118 yeah well, being a childish girl that likes to play with kids doest really help me be popular... or being on the computer all day long either
4474929 Omg I don't really like kids but i spend most of my day on my laptop. I'm not popular, except I never get picked on. The 'cool' kids just decide to ignore me and act like I don't exist.
4475259 well, the 'cool kids' on my scool decide to pick on me
, but that is not anything new.. 
4475540 Omg that's so sad.
Just ignore them. You're probably already in summer vacation, and if not the you're going to be in a short while. Message me so we don't spam the comments for poor Diamond Wings.
4475540 Well I'm gonna sleep because I'm a lazy ass.
4475547 I dont care if you spam my comments
4470766 I know what your going through too
4476451 not easy
makes me happy to know people care
thank you for understanding
4476518 No problem :D