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Thebravenorse


In the end, I hope you had the time of your life.

Comments ( 16 )

Wow. This was quite erotic. Have a like.

Why didn't you just add this to It's you and me, baby instead?
Honestly, you're willing to write clop in a different story but not the one you've dedicated for Spilight?

4355676 Because, 'It's you and me, baby', is not for clop. Its just for short, sweet, nice, under 1,000 word scenarios. :twilightsmile: And also I did add this to that story. But this is the clop version.

Just as you've giving me nothing but good feedback, I feel like it's my turn. You did an amazing job of making me feel their emotion in only 2k plus words, their love and sadness and most importantly whether you believe me or not I've actually help me out by, just by reading this to give me little ideas on what and how I can improve on my own stories. Thanks.:heart:

4357312 Alright, I've got no ground to stand on in this, you are the author after all

She wanted to be his... lover. emphasis oh his
Also very good storie you really gave me the feels
Also (agen) can you tell me were you got the cover picture?thanks

4487278 Google: Spike and Twilight.

Hmmm.... :trixieshiftright: I like my stories strait and to the point, and this lived up to that standard with Flying colors!!! :rainbowlaugh: NO! :rainbowderp: NO GO AWAY! :rainbowdetermined2: Go away you rainbow farting excuse for a-! :rainbowhuh: Er-, I mean... ANYWAYS!!! I feel like you copy/pasted their lines for the first few paragraphs... In all honesty, it's not entirely taboo, but it is somewhat frowned appon. Now I see that its a rough draft, and for that, it is VERY impressive! Over all, good clop fic. 9/10 :ajsmug: (couldn't get around the Copy/pasty stuff, sorry :twilightsheepish: )

That escalated quickly. Cute story though. A few spelling and grammar issues here and there but not bad.

Sooo... Question time...
Are they both immortal, or mortal? Because if not, then I am disappoint.

First off: This is not a finale draft!

I can see that.

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