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Grocery List

The story of a stallion who simply goes grocery shopping without his list of items he needs.

Mostly a filler story for a longer story I'm working on. The characters have no names, and the protagonist has no description of what he looks like. Let your imaginations run wild!

Hope it's somewhat enjoyable.

(Story to be edited eventually. Image © by me: http://belgianwaffleart.deviantart.com/#/d54m5dq )

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Mamluke

Mamluke #1 · Apr 2nd, 2012 · · ·

well is was actually very good, giving the main character no name and no description was a Bad idea man, giving some details will let the reader create in his mind the world you are trying to describe, no mater how many details you write, each reader will have have is own little world

nevertheless it was a cool story, a funny one , I´ve spotted no errors.
good luck on your other story dude, I bet it is going to be great