When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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4801397 Not immediately, but soon. And the rape part is debatable. I'm not entirely sure what I'm gonna make happen. I just know that Jason in such close proximity to The Sisters will raise up some problems we haven't seen him deal with yet.
Lol 'raise up'
She nearly killed someone because his species JEERED at her?!?!?
I was a social outcast and got punched in the face but I'm not killing every human I see
A certain princess is about to...
I just give up. Do whatever.
Also, really Twilight!? BULLYING!?!?!? Because FRIENDS ALL AROUND YOU WOULD NEVER F^CKING HELP!!!
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You have part of the story. Twilight still has to finish it, and justify herself to Celestia.
Wow, just wow, Twilight...
4802734 Why do I get the feeling it's just more of Twilight being sheltered as all hell and having no experience dealing with people who don't like her or any species not a pony...
Sure, eating meat is bad for a vegetarian species, so what about griffons?
4802736 I'll tell you what I told the other guy. Twilight never finished her story. Bullying is the least of what happened.
No it's not rape.
Somepony's gonna get sent to the moon.
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Damn dude.
Aw Shit!
Its about to go down.
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4802739 what about griffons? A backwater town like Ponyville wouldn't get visitors like that. It's that little off-the-map town nobody knows or cares about. Like Denmark. Or North Carolina.
4802744 One can hope, I personally think that Celestia will revoke her princess title until she feels Twilight can handle it.
I wouldn't want her in any position of power, she basically put an entire town under mind control over some self-imposed deadline, bitch has issues
4802812 Ohhhh myyyyyy goooooooddddd!!!!
...this chapter left a bad taste in my mouth. Granted, Twilight did imply that there was more to her story, but at this point, after all that's happened I could not care less what of it. You don't condemn an entire species because someone called you a nerd then, pants'd you. And if this boils back to Flash Sentry and her interest in him, I'm going to be pissed. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, Twilight is a scrub, and Luna is best pony
Ever think about longer chapters? At this rate I'm just starting to get into it when it ends. It's hard to actually enjoy it
Also why are we ganging up on Twilight? Everyone is to blame right now. Sure, Twilight is feeling less remorse than, say, Pinkie... but I don't get why hooves are all pointing straight to Twi as the instigator.
4802859 It's getting easier to pump out chapters, but it would still take far longer between updates. At least two weeks. Would you rather have quick updates or longer chapters?
'Twould be quite ironic if Twilight's experience in the human version of Equestria mirrored Jason's in Equestria to an extent. It'd be quite entertaining seeing Celly chew Twilight out about her hypocrisy and how two wrongs don't make a right.
In any case, I'm fairly certain magic kindergarten will be the least of Twilight's problems when Celestia lays down the law.
4802749 oh if something like that happened I'd... well, feel all snuggly all over. Twibitch gettin' what's coming to her.
I definitely like how you used twilight reaction to him as the central reason for every pony's reaction to him, makes every pony else reaction to him a bit more believable. After all "if the princes of friendship is shunning him he must be bad" She may not have intended to turn the whole town against him but she needs to realize that as princes even small actions and shows of emotion can sway the masses and slamming the door on someones face sends a pretty strong message.
4802859 herd mentality, I saw someone cover this early in the beginning of the story
Basically with twilight being at head of ponyville and she shunned him, instincts tell the others that if the leader of the herd shunned him you should as well
4802870 quick updates!
I demand a verbal smack-down the likes of which Fimfiction has never seen before.
I demand CARNAGE
I demand a new chapter as soon as possible
4802866 I don't think she did anything, more that the other ponies picked up on the fact that Twi didn't like him and decided that he shouldn't be trusted.
I only hope Jason gets to verbally tear into Twilight after he hears what she went through at Canterlot High.
4802902 She needs to realize that in her potion as both a national hero and a princes small actions can convey a strong message whether intentional or not, why do you think Celestia tries to show as little emotion as possible? She as much as gives a stink-eye to a pony and the masses will have him lynched.
*Mortal Kombat theme starts playing* Go Celestia, wow I dunno how buddy, you made me love Celestia while hating Twilight. You deserve infinite mustaches
4802726 To be fair... have you ever been bullied?
I mean seriously bullied. Tormented day in and day out without letup. Attacked, threatened, intimidated, terrorized without relief. It's hell on earth. What's worse, the few days your tormentor or tormentors decide to leave you alone you live in terror of when they're going to pop around a corner and proceed to take your life apart. And noone in authority gives two shits.
Kids have committed suicide over this sort of thing. And we're a species that's used to a rough-and-tumble world!
She was already suffering from nightmarish dysmorphia, she'd been rendered physically helpless-- lost her horn AND her wings, remember--- and then she stumbles into the hell-pit that is the typical public school, where she was probably treated like a retarded circus freak by everyone there. And remember; she was already something of an emotional trainwreck beforehand. Hyper intelligent, reclusive, probably because she was bullied as a foal-- (magic kindergarten was apparently so bad she had nightmares about it as a full grown adult) and had only barely recently learned how to even TRY to make friends again.
And there's the over-arching fact that Celestia once again sent her in alone, unarmed and helpless on a mission that a responsible leader would have sent in a team of trained marines or navy SEALS to handle.
Yeah, I'm starting to buy that she had a legitimate reason for hating-- maybe even FEARING-- a human on sight.
4802941 SOMEONE GIVE THIS MOTHERFUCKER A COOKIE
I don't know if this was revised out, but didn't Discord impersonate Celestia at one point?
4802896 I SECOND THIS!
4802959 He did. And he will come back. With a vengeance.
4802691 please just go overboard with it , i've seen a ton of storys go to mindless sex at all times .
By the way, does anyone else want Jason to "go to the dark side". Like just give into his hatred and anger an go on a decent into evil. Would love to see something small and no seemingly meaningless just break him. It's been a long time coming.
4802972 Jason has been terrorized by ponies constantly for three years. He had no safe haven, no breaks, no protection.
Constant sex? No. With Jason's state of mind, there's the slight possibility he won't want to stick his dick in these crazy ponies. Sex and intimacy will be brought up, talked about, perhaps even attempted, but Jason has been hurt too much for too long to trust a pony with his body for a long time.
He's already going local, what with stealing glances, but he is FAR from actually wanting to fuck a pony.
4802734 That really doesn't justify Twilight's actions at all. Even if something SO HORRIFIC that scarred her for life, isn't it part of friendship that don't judge a book by cover (or species) or second chances even? Sure, it's AU, but... just... my god.
HAHA It's time for encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTrsWeLgu66L_EfG9df6vM26XVqevvNBr_65E-dJluv0invqsy5Pg
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This needs to happen.
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will Cadence be in this story anytime soon? I want to see the pony of love meet a guy full of hatred.
4803014 You're right. It doesn't justify it. It's not supposed to be justified. She can't justify it. There was no justice in what she did. It was wrong. It was unfair. It was an immoral, impulsive, stupid reaction brought on by fear.
That's the point.
I don't write infallible characters. People make mistakes. That's what that was. Twilight done goof'd.
damn seems like luna is a more down to earth princess than celestia, on another note i love the new art
Finally. The moment we've all been waiting for.
The Mane 6 and the others will pay for what they've done.
4803049 She's just not an evening pony.
4803037 That's, kind of beautiful.
Oh, and one more thing.
4803033 Probably not. I don't find her that interesti—
...Princess of love.
Man who can't trust or befriend ponies.
Diarchs desperate to help him.
Ohohoho, ideeeeaaaaa...
4803050 Tickets are starting at $50. $80 for the Splash-Zone.
4802859 She's one of the princesses and an important government figure, if she shuns someone, they'll all shun them.
preferred the old picture D:
4803104 I see. I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
But this picture is fucking awesome. I like it. You wouldn't be able to tell, but Rainbow is my second-favorite. Right after AJ.