When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Well, that was a letdown. And I mean in-universe - bit of an anti-climax here, though it does tell us that the charade runs really fucking deep.
And fuck Rainbow Dash. And Twilight Sparkle too. But Rainbow Dash more.
You know, it takes either a very talented or evil author to make me hate a mlp character. you my good sir have made me hate RD like no other.
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Keep up the good work!
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Now to sit back and wait for Celestia to find out about everything from his side... This oughtta be fun
4757839 I concur. I dislike Rainbow Dash the most out of all ponies when it comes to fanfics (she's "kinda meh but okay" in the show, I have no soft spots for braggarts, especially those that sell themselves long ahead of anything that could remotely be considered cool), but few times do I remember feeling the urge to make her swallow a loose frag.
4757821 YES I CONCUR! FUCK THEM INDEED!!!
4757839 I'm evil, that much is true. It's not my place to say whether I'm talented, though. Every artist is biased towards their own work.
I hope it's from here we get the truth of what's been done to him come to light and Celestia punishes those who are deserving. I'm pretty sure Rainbow has probably broken laws in attacking him the many ways she has.
Fucking hell, if Tia trusts someone, then you should too you stupid fuckers.
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4757873 Both negatively and positively, depending on the case.
But you, man... you're one talented motherfucker.
Top three biggest cunts in Equestria.
1. Rainbow Dash/ Fucking bitch
2. Twilight Sparkle/ Stupid bitch
3. Applejack/ Dumb bitch
4757881 Well thank you, it means a lot to me. Especially since I do put a fuckload of effort into this. I'm glad you like it.
This would be a better story if any of the characters' actions made any sense.
4757892 That and pacing are my main weaknesses. I'm doing my best, and will only improve with experience.
4757888 My hatred for everything in this story is restricted to in-universe bile. Meta-speaking, it's probably one of my all-time favorite fanfics, no joke.
so from what I understood... Celestia is completely neutral? not only that, she will send the 6 back to Ponyville without a single dialogue or comment about them being complete jerks?
She's not defending him or correcting misunderstandings she's letting them believe that he's an animal and she's just putting him under control.
I WAS RIGHT!!!!! FUCK THEM ALL!!!
4757907 ...I would hug you right now if I could. An epic bro-hug.
4757908 She doesn't know what they've done. But now Jason is in the perfect position to tell her .
4757887 4. Trixie/ BOSS ASS BITCH BITCH BITCH BITCH BITCH
4757924 AH! I forgot It was discord who knew what happened
It makes sense now
Jason's actions are valid, or at least are in this context. He's been treated at best as wild beast, and at worst as a horrible monster. Those who should be capable of showing him mercy and understanding aren't or at least not all of them. I honestly believe that Applejack and possibly Pinkie Pie are the only two who have some concern about him. Fluttershy is suffering because she denied her very destiny. Dash... Well Dash is being abrasive, arrogant, basically she's being Rainbow Dash.
Although I would dare say this version of her is a little closer aligned to Hotdiggitydemon's .mov version of Rainbow Dash than the Equestria Prime version. It's funny all of the quirks that we see in each one of these alternate realities. That's how I view each fan fiction. It's simply an alternate reality from Equestria Prime.
My Little Dashie, Cupcakes, Room for Rent, Just Another Mare, Breathtaking, The Sun & The Rose, and even Ben and the Bats are all alternate universes that branch off of Equestria Prime.
It's part of what makes reading these stories so enjoyable. We're able to see the reaction and development of some of our favorite characters in strange new ways. Now, that said... Yeah, I'm still disappointed in Twilight. I'm getting pissed at Rainbow Dash, and while I'm not angry at Fluttershy I am also disappointed in her as well. I can't say that I am in Discord, and that's because I have a feeling that he's trying to do more good than harm in this. I really do think so. Sure, he's doing it in the most dickish way possible, but that's Discord.
So what happened to Rarity and Pinkie?
And why did Fluttershy join the others if she's scared shitless of Jason?
And I'm still hoping Twilight and Rainbow Dash get there sternest of talking-to's after the shit they've pulled.
Dunno why but you're story, particulary this chapter, reminds me of this scene.
Of course now Jason can tell Celestia and Luna about it, thing of it is, will they believe him? And I can't wait to hear Jason's outburst at why Twilight did what she did to him on his first day in Equestria.
Not a big "shit-hitting-fan" moment I was hoping for. But then again, as you said, he is now in the perfect position to tell the princesses what happened that would lead into the inevitable "oh snap". I hope you make it happen within the next few chapters, as I'm running out of nails to bite. And seriously, I don't know if you alter the story based on comments and critics, but please, PLEASE, give Rainbow Dash what she has coming! Be it physical, mental, or emotional, tear her down please. She is such a bitch.
Ok rant over, have a cookie
This is not what I expected but I do still like where this is going. I'd like to see what happens next. Will the Mane 6 continue to pester him? Will Sunbutt and Inkbutt successfully rehabilitate him? That would be nice; the second half of this story being him getting the help he needs.
Doubt it will end like that though. I'm sure there's lots more suffering and misery for him around the corner.
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I must disagree:
Applejack / Creepy Bitch
4757971 Nom.
And yes, I do occasionally take ideas from my audience. But only if they fit into what I already have. And not always immediately. You guys help me with the details, but at the end of the day INRE is my brain-baby.
4757888 I hope that after this story is completed we get some answers to actually why all of the ponies in this are ***holes!
Okay, so the real Celestia really did meet him in the beginning, and it wasn't just Discord in disguise. I'm somewhat relieved.
4758009 Discord is pulling some shit. But he didn't pull that shit.
4757998 When the time comes, all will be revealed.
While I want to keep reading this, I think I'm done with it. The girls are getting away with way too much [they treated a sentient creature and supposed good friend of Celestia HORRIBLY] and don't get so much as a slap on the wrists. For me, that's a dealbreaker.
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Rarity and Pinkie more or less avoided him, I'd think that's what they're doing now.
Fluttershy is ashamed at how he was treated, but at the same time, can't really work up the nerve to talk to him.
Rainbow could get assault and harassment charges at the least from what she's pulled. Twilight is a racist in this story, not really very acceptable in society, but not illegal either
4758061 I'm sorry to hear that.
But they will get what's coming to them. Just...not yet. These things take time to develop.
Why can`t i like this twice !?
4758107 You can if you make a second account.
EDIT: This is a joke. Thought I should make that clear.
such bloodlust from the commentors
4758117 Isn't it glorious? I get to piss over a thousand people off whenever I want and they beg me for more.
I feel like Steven Moffat.
4758071 Hm... I'll be watching closely. ;)
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Ya but doing that gets you into trouble. Also, probably not a good idea to joke about that. Never know who might be listening and lots of people can't seem to figure out sarcasm or jokes due to lack of normal vocal and facial cues.
4758165 I'll have an entire arc dedicated solely to karma fucking them up.
4758173 I'll have an entire arc dedicated solely to karma fucking them up.
...Déjà vu...
They are herbivores.
Step 1 : Grab jaw and pull down.
Step 2 : Use other hand to get a good grip on any selected tooth.
Step 3 : Pull teeth until lessons are learned and apologies meant.
4758190 The Wonderbolts are the elite of the elite. Equestria's best. And they are insanelt hard to get into.
So say you can't get accepted if you have a criminal record...
4758047 K because if not, then can you bring Rainbow Dash, Rartiy and Twilight here, tied up, and let me borrow your baseball bat?
4758251 You do that. I will punch Applejack in the fucking mouth.
With my mouth.
Softly.
Because I like her.
A lot.
4758196 yep i figured that much about some of what dash was going to get as karma payback, after all she basically assaulted without any provocation another sentient being several times, be or not a friend of celestia that is a serious offense anyplace, on equestria must be even worse with all the harmony and crap
i dont know what will happen to pinkie and fluttershy besides their own rampant guilt trips about the way they acted, and how such actions where the total opposite of their elements, and i doubt discord is going to visit flutter about it
applejack is already trying to make amends but sure there is more in store for her
rarity will be hit where it hurts her the most as her reputation will take a serious hit when it is know how she treated a "Personal Friend of the Princess" after they sent him to ponyville, among other things
for twilight i just hope it is gruesome with heavy dosage of magic kindergarten and lots of pain
4758196 This. So much fucking this.
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It's so satisfying to hear that. Reading this makes a specific sound file go through my head: