When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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...Discord?
Well well well, it seems Twilight activated Discord's trap card!
Funniest part? Discord didn't have to do a thing: Twilight discorded herself all on her own.
Okay, that's messed up, even for Discord.
Oh, Dissy.
....I'm a bit confused. What, exactly, did he do that Cellybeans wouldn't?
Why was Discord having Celestia's thoughts right up until the end there?
...So that wasn't Celestia at the beginning? And Discord is evil and free? So this if before season 3?
Either way, Celestia would have done the same thing. And Twilight...kind of deserved that. And more.
As much as I liked how Twilight finally got her scolding, finding out that it was Discord took it away from me. Just sayin'
4381306 You'll see.
4381318 I have an idea in mind for this story. But don't worry, the ride is just starting.
to be fair, everything "discord" said about twilight's treatment towards Jason is still completely valid and something i can easily see Celestia saying in response to Twi's actions.
So is this betrayal? Or something to teach her a lesson? Cause... I can kinda see the latter as a possibility.
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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4381320 Maybe Celestia sent him specifically because she couldn't instill the sheer sense of failure in Twilight that he could while pretending to be her?
4381342 fixed
4381350 Being mean is one thing, crushing them emotionally is another. But yeah, pretty much.
Like, anger? That might not get the right feelings in Twilight. Too much fear, not enough crushing despair and knowledge that she fucked up.
DISCORD? Isn't he like, reformed? Or is that non canon? I feel I asked this already though. Whatever. Still, this probably isn't good news for Jason. Poor guy needs at least one chapter where he's happy.
EDIT: Nevermind he's clearly using Jason to "Discord" the Main Six. They deserve it though.
4381334 But of course, the act wouldn't have been nearly as effective if Twilight saw Celestia was "out of character". As much fun as it is to lead ponies astray with a lie, sometimes beating them in the face with the truth can be SO much more fun. Besides, if Discord was a malicious liar all the time, that would be predictable. And if there's one thing Discord isn't, it's predictable. He gave the scolding Celestia would've, but without the support Twilight needed to grow and learn from her experience.
4381318 I gotta agree. As much as I enjoy our little Spurgle breaking down, knowing it wasn't Celestia kinda takes away from it.
Also after phaux Celestia said that hes her personal friend I was hoping that she was going to say.
Or something along those lines
4381381 oh i agree, i am just pointing it out to any who might now be feeling sympathy for this stories twilight despite her actions.
Oh, snap! Didn't see that ending coming.
4381338
Look at the beginning of the last sentence. Its a dead giveaway.
i kinda hope gilda and jason become friends, i truly do
4381389 Don't wanna come off as an ass, but, since we're on the topic of corrections, your choice is missing an h...
just letting you know.
please don't hate me
4381347
Uh, heellooo? He's Discording them, I don't think Celestia would allow that unless it's accidental or Discord's betraying her.
I don't know how to feel about the last two sentances. Other than that, that was a great chapter
4381291
He barely had to do anything! He just made her realize what she had done.
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This story is getting better every single chapter. I'm so glad you did that rewrite now! Keep up the good work.
if twilight is refering to when sunset brainwashed a whole population then she has an extremely high tolerance scale . i mean does the point where its right to take vengence somewhere in between biological warfare and consuming the souls of the innocent?
I only can't wait to see what happens when it turns out Jason isn't the weak minded fool that Discord thinks he is. I want Jason to kick Discord's ass in the end. Hehe maybe Discord goes on about being a God of Chaos and Jason remarks, "You? A God? Funny, because last time I checked, Gods don't bleed.".
Congrats on the feature!
Assuming Celestia has been Discord in disguise since day one, then that is fucking devious! He probably knew how they would all react to Jason, and now he's making them feel tremendous guilt over it. I mean no duh I want them to feel shame and emotional pain like no other considering what they did to Jason, but how Discord used him as a catalyst... damn.
4381518
"...Puny god."
Eh. It would have been much more impactful if it was really Celestia.
bah. bah to it all. just..bah. we need a new new chapter..to sort our crazy out.
wait i'm confused? was it celestia or discord. i'm lost now causes frankly i don't see how Discord pointing out that twilight being a bigot help spread chaos. (Well except weakening one of the elements for the tree for the plunder plants but still.)
btw will you be adding creatures like the Chimera or reference to Tirek?
4381572 It's funny how you think canon still applies to this story AT ALL.
But...maybe. We're gonna be seeing a LOT of Equestria in the coming...dozen or so chapters. Maybe more.
Probably more.
Could I be considered a horrible person if I say that I smiled at Twilight's
sufferinglesson?4381553
Heheh, yeah just like that.
And of course I expect Discord would be stupid enough to reveal he was the one who brought Jason to Equestria. Which would give Jason a perfect target for his wrath.
4381590 I smiled when I wrote it, and I'm a terrible person, so yeah.
ohhhhh snap crackle pop dis gon be gud
Ok...what? I really don't see why Celestia had to be Discord there, since, as others have said, I think it would have been perfectly in character for Celestia to have done/said the exact same things.
Secondly, I repeat what I said in the original version of the story: I'm sure your Canterlot High friends would just LOVE to hear what you really think of humans, Twilight. And given this light, it seems doubtful you were trying to redeem Sunset at all, and more stick her in what you considered an alternate form of Tartarous.
You know what? I LIKE Discord. Sure. Still devious as fuck, but... Think about it. After all these years of torment and abuse, this is still SOME form of pity on the poor being! Make them feel ALL the guilt those fuckers deserve Mr. Chaos!
I was a bit surprised to see Discord, but I guess it makes sense. After all, he’s floating around somewhere after these three years. And one of the big deals he did raise was that Twilight, despite her assurances otherwise, never seemed to really regard him as a friend until the end of this season. Now, even if we accept that they moved beyond that (Tirek or no Tirek), Discord is supposed to be learning about the Magic of Friendship just as Twilight was. And she’s spent the last three years being an absolute terror to poor Jason.
I fully accept that he is doing this to teach her a lesson, and also accept that it would make sense that, being Discord, his methods are much more severe than Celestia’s would be. I don’t expect him to go on to mess with the others (except for Rainbow Dash, who is probably the worst of the bunch since her actions against Jason went up to and included assault); Applejack is probably totally safe since she’s already learned her "lesson.”
However, this leaves perhaps a much bigger question: Just what the hell happened on the other side of the mirror?
Looks like things are about to take a turn for the worst, and no one's gonna realize it until it's too late. Can't help but draw a few parallels between this and the Red Wedding from Game of Thrones. Can't wait to see the rains weep o'er Equestria. Keep up the good work.
4381306 I think Celestia would mostly do the same thing. I think, instead of leaving Twilight after the admonishment, that Celestia would invite Twilight to make it good. To help track down Jason, to apologize, to help and make sure it doesn't happen again. Twilight screwed up, and let her narrow experiences cause a lot of misery (even if it was unintentionally), but the right thing here isn't punishment, it's to repair the damage.
Oh my. I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
4381638 The questions raised in one chapter are usually answered in the following chapters. Everything has a purpose. Celestia would've been good NOW, but it would've stunted the plot and ruined the entire story I have planned.
Maybe I'm working towards a much BIGGER payoff with this? The story is only just now picking up speed as far as plot-progression, and I'm already in double-digits with chapters. Listen and listen closely: This is going to be a LONG story. Scratch that, it's gonna be a LONG-ASS story. Shit's gonna happen because of this. A lot of shit. Bad shit.
Don't care if it is discord. Justice (even of temporary) has been served
4381347 Possibly. Celestia could've taught Twilight the same lesson, but she would've been comforting about it, essentially making Twilight feel somewhat good about her actions.
OHAI DISCORD!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
YES FINALLY! EVEN THOUGH IT WAS DISCORD TWILIGHT FUCKING DESERVED IT THAT BITCH. HAHAHAHHAH !