Ma and Pa

It is always painful for somepony to lose those close to them. Applejack felt that pain since she was a little filly after her parents died. To rid herself of the pain and emptiness inside her, she pays a weekly visit to their grave.

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Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #1 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·

Ohh... I hate stories that make me cry like this. But I love them at the same time. It's so confusing!

rocklobster

rocklobster #2 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·

That was great! Only I wish Apple Bloom didn't give up her bow. I love that bow!

SFC

SFC #3 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · 4 ·

Lol, her parents are dead.

Leafall

Leafall #4 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·

I'm sorry, but there was nothing too surprising here. The idea has been written so many times, I lost count of it all. I read so many similar fics already, it get's a bit tiring. What I mean, is that the idea is not very original. Which isn't the biggest problem, though. There are plenty of stories that have the basic premise repeated over, and over again, but they can have the story conveyed in a way, that it just bursts with clever ideas and originality. Unfortunately, I couldn't notice this in your story, sorry. (I'm wondering how many hate comments I'll get)

Putting aside my complaints, I did enjoy the story, not only for the fact that I like AJ, and I'll read just about any story with her. It was a quick, short story, but I felt like it was the right amount. While I didn't cry, I didn't gag either. Nothing's worse than a story that tries to be overly dramatic, and failing in it. (OK, there are worse things, but it's still a crime!)

Anyway, I liked the story and I'm giving it a 'like'!

NoMoreFanshipping

NoMoreFanshipping #5 · Jun 16th, 2015 · · ·

Time for le me to troll. Look's like Applejacks words warmed her parents... To the core. Alright that was mean, I apologize. Forgiven? Eeyup. Really bigblackclock?