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ThunderCracker
They're gonna mess up my FUCKING TOMATOES.
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Wow DAT ENDING
Great!!!
AWESOME!!!
XD
Like it
...That ending was so anticlimatic and yet so fitting
God out of all the ways he could have ruined the moment. By the way I was overjoyed that you came out with a sequel
nice
so glad you decided to extend the one shot into a longer story! cant wait to see how far it goes, and good it gets!
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"EVERYPONY DOES NOT LIKE ME FOR WHAT I'VE DONE IN THE PAST
You forgot the me I put it in red.
4275038 Yeah, that chapter was an all-nighter, so I was kinda sleepy.
4275043 want me to help with a little bit of editing?
4275049 Sure, why not?
.... well shit. that sucks.
I have to say that was a good chapter. I am glad that Luna found her special someone. You have a good start for the story. I do like Slice of life storys. what happens next? It seems that Anthony has a bad pass that he don't like to remember. Maybe that why he can understand Luna so well. I like to know where are the gard's that are supposed to gard Princess Celestia and Luna? Anthony mite git shot by a gard if they find him before Celestia can tell them that he belongs hear. How are the ponys going to take to a human?
It well be fun to see how this story plays out. I think that you need to add more framework to the story to help it flow better. Are you going to bring in the mane 6 to the story the Elements of harmony? Or is Luna afraid of them? Good luck and keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
Awsome job
I think you shod of dragged out the secret behind his necklace but otherwise this chapter was good
the entire necklace bit just had me playing the 'exposition' song from the nostalgia critic in my mind.
not bad
Not bad, but where's her accent? Even without the RCV she still talks with an old English accent.
4276268 Your avatar is absolutely adorable. Love newyorkx3's art
4280357
You mean that garbage that appears to have been drawn with a crayola crayon?
4280887 Whatever you think, man.
4278869 Is that a bad thing?
4280131 But hast thou ever attempted to write a piece where one must alter thine writing style to accommodate one particular accent.
Trust me it's difficult
4282434
Ah'm quite sure yer jus' pullin mah horseshoes there, pardner. An' 'sides, y'all jus' need ta write in a way ya feel is right. If them others don't agree, then ya ask fer advice. Is how them languages develop.
I'm just waiting for him to meet Blueblood.
4283410 Of course comrade. You must also share the vodka with best pony friend yes?
Ok what hell was that one hell of a nightmare but like the story so far
Bloody fucking hell
Faust almighty that nightmare!
Speaking of Faust do you gave plans of the Princesses parents appearing whether it would be Faust or whoever you come up with?
wow, just wow
HELL NO!!!
What a Nightmare!
2spooky4me
DAMN!
...
...
...
Moar.
"Chapter 4"...
Not to be a troll or anything... but where's her archaic accent?
4319083 I'm not sure if you've read my reply, but I'm not very good at doing accents that aren't modern day British,or Russian, so yeah, there's Luna's accent.
Not trying to sound like a dick or anything like that, or if I didn't reply then I must've done too many All-nighters...
4320077 Not at all, not at all.
Eh, I guess I'm just a bit jealous, since all my editor talks about is getting down the archaic accent down to perfection. Still, great fic however. :3
The pacing...
...
Just keeps getting BETTER AND BETTER!
Lovin this story already. Keep it up man! ;P
4325894 Thanks!
Zipper is best Cock Blocker.
keep up the good work man
I love Anthony's interaction with Celestia, as well as Luna.
Very sexy.
If Luna can become human, can she also have Anthony's baby?
I sense a possibility of a Gary Stu popping up
Dude, go back, delete this chapter and give us a longer one that makes more sense.