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Allright, transferring these over from the other site I created them for. I will be self editing and revising them as I post. I will make sure to edit and post at least 1-2 chapters a week until I hit the end.
Twilight- I must sex now.
Ike- What?
...
Twilight-NOW!!!
Later that afternoon...
Newspaper-Ponyville newcomer raped by "Twilight Sparkle"
3535356 Yeah, I wrote this over a year ago… It was my first attempt at clop ever. I am mainly fixing things like structure, grammar, punctuation, and spelling before tossing them up here.
Hopefully the comment means you didn't hate it entirely?
I have to say that this is a good start to the story. I am happy that I can read it again. I read it the first time on sofurry.com. a good story. I do hope you write sum new storys beside the one you have on sofurry.
Dragonfox
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I am in the writers block stage on Hybrid (another story set in the MLP universe before show years). But Hopefully I will overcome that soon. I am just polishing these up in my free time.
OK, I am going to Feminist Hell for finding this chapter funny.
That being said... I find it hard to believe that the avatar of chaos is going to be so thrown by a little gender bending. I also think he wouldn't have quite such stereotypical reactions to the situation... I mean the whole "I'm being raped and I'm so ashamed that I like it" thing is really, really common in porn. Given that Celestia's not herself, he wanted her anyway, and he's helpless, I'd think Discord would be the type to make wiseass remarks and try to psych himself into enjoying it, because what's much more humiliating for the god of chaos than being raped would be being seen as unable to roll with the punches and adapt to circumstances. Yes, he'd obviously be frightened and upset and humiliated, but to me he seems more likely to try to convince himself this isn't so bad than to dwell on the fact that his body is betraying him... after all, if he can manage to convince himself that this is just a kinky sexual experiment that isn't working out real well rather than that the mare he loves is torturing and humiliating him, he can probably spare himself some of the psychological damage. Discord seems like the kind of guy who, when things go wrong, pretends he meant to do that. You actually have an element of that in there when he says "A long time from now we may look back on this and laugh".
It's difficult to pull off, because you have to walk a fine line between letting the readers think *you*, the author, are okay with it, and making it clear that the character is pretending to themselves to be okay with it, when you do something like that with a rape scenario... but sometimes you get stuck in situations like that when you're writing something that basically never happens to the kind of character you're having it happen to. You can't fall back on standard tropes because the character is so very, very far from "normal" in the way he behaves and reacts to things, and standard tropes are based on what more "normal" people might be expected to think and feel.
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At least you somewhat enjoyed it? Quote: "OK, I am going to Feminist Hell for finding this chapter funny."
It was after all my first ever attempt at both gender swap and a rape scenario. Probably should have just stuck with one unknown instead of two.
But my biggest reasoning behind Discord's actions would have to be the fact that he has literally been stripped of his powers; something that majorly defines him.
I see all of your recent works have Discord as one of the major characters, so its fair to assume that you have a great deal of respect for the Character. Perhaps If I ever have a Discord segment in a future work Ill run it past you.(I don't have any in mind at the moment.)
(And if you didn't see my other comments, this story is already complete and has been posted elsewhere for nearly a year. I am currently editing for grammar and other things before posting it.)
His power level what is it
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All will be explained in further chapters.
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Don't worry, I got ya bro
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HA! Thanks! I was tempted to post Over 9000 in response to this post 3569816
this chapter calls for a couple of most fitting songs
time to.....CAPTURE SOME BOOTY
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Thank ye kindly for the sea shanty, I'll be uploading the next grammar edited chapter shortly. Although it's pretty much just a story of plundering ;)
As far as HiE's go this story isn't bad, several things though:
It's Pinkie not Pinky
Applejack called Ike silly, which doesn't seem like something she would say (although Pinkie would)
Also this has been slightly on the cliched side
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Aye Aye Captain
3578830 Oops, did i miss one somewhere?
I thought that i had fixed those occurrences of Pinky instead of Pinkie… Ill do a skim for them.
**EDIT*** omg wow… i did fix them once… I fixed them all to the wrong way. Thanks for pointing it out. A simple command Find should fix up my problem…
As to it being a bit cliched I understand entirely. Back when I wrote this I was attempting to stay relatively true to the given characters (While adding massive amounts of yiff for the Sofurry.com community who is obsessed with the stuff.) So it is understandable how some of the lines and interactions could be a little Cliche. ( I did use some stolen lines directly from the show in earlier chapters such as 20% cooler etc.)
Considering the fact that it is Transformed HiE story i wanted to keep a solid base of norms( and don't forget sex…) so when something important and strange happens the audience really notices.
Thanks for taking the time to comment!
this is getting better and better even with that gender swap chapter. I got a severe case of "damn you boner" and " lol da fuk did I just read" from that chapter. I must say you are a really good writer
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Ha. When I wrote that scene it was a 'what da fuk am i writing' moment. But I enjoyed writing the Discord chapter before hand.
It was my first ever attempt at a genuine rape scenario, and it was also my first ever attempt at gender swap. Glad to know it wasn't terrible.
Im most of the way through the story edits now. Ch 14 is a 2 part, then theres 15 and 16 to tie things up. I am in the process of fleshing out a Loosely Related sequel to Dr. Whooves. (it won't require anyone to have read the story though) But after I get that all straightened out i might just think about a Penchant Sequel. I can fish around in this dusty brain for a new story arc.
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sounds cool
Not to sure about how I would feel if other stallions 'fucked' the ones I love. Atleast Ike still acts like a human. This really shouldn't sit well with him.
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What he doesn't know won't kill him.
3593543no but it might kill them when he finds out
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If I ever have the time and inclination I might address such matters in a sequel.
The magazine and the eyeballing...It's official.
Twilight learnt the Ways of Perviness from Molestia herself.
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Yes, I accept the existence of Molestia as FACT.
Not gonna lie, this is actually a pretty good clopfic.
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Glad you are enjoying it. This was my first shared work with the internet, and I posted it here as an afterthought. It got on the popular pages a few times over on sofurry about 6 months or so ago. It really is a clop heavy fic...(with storyline for myself) But hey, that's what they like over there!
You posted the comment on chapter 4, so you have an ocean of theoretical clop left to wade through. Have fun you horny bastard ;)
So far I have only shared MLP stories, but I'm going back to primarily using sofurry as I will likely start exploring my own fantasy and sci fi worlds at some point.
I find these kind of storys annoying but i think i will give it a shot.
Did you like this story? Well if you did check out My So Furry Profile ! I was there long before I joined here so FimFic will always be secondary to me.
I currently have a slightly darker clop story underway, nearing completion, that is only on SoFurry due to the admins here being unwilling to deal with an issue I had with a troll/hate group that attacked me.
(Hybrid: Child of Time) (Changeling, Dark, Adventure, Revenge, Romance, Clop, Dark Clop, Light Kink Material, Death, Stand Alone Sequel to Dr Wooves: TRoE, Unwriten History)
Also when I complete that I will begin working on my sequel to Penchant. That story will likely get posted here unless the mods decide to be fucktards.
https://lord-ike.sofurry.com
Ahh pirate puns you cant beat em.
I must say good but sappy until the end meow to the brain bleach.
Really loved story, questionable at times but i grew to love! Ike is a lot like a unicorn version of my pegasus OC Snowfall and i love that!
I do have a few suggestions for the penchant sequel, have Ike fall in love for just one of the girls, best suggestion is rainbow because of the intimacy shown between them. Second is some parts just need to be slown down just a tad. Please dont take the last one as an insult because this is really a good story! :)
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No, I agree with you on that last part. I am not and never will be a Tolkien class writer and I can accept that. As long as someone enjoys the work then I have done my job properly. But I do have a tendency to rush things, and sometimes once I get my mind on the next plot point I write toward it at an ultrasonic speeds.( This story has a few prime examples of that. )
I hope at least, that this story which started as my first ever shameless (work of porn/ first work ever shared online) clopfic (originally) containing no real plot whatsoever, grew into something enjoyable.
Sequel wise, there won't be too much mane 6 as I ended Penchant nearly immediately after Twilight's Coronation (Season 3 End) and I need to separate Ike from their stories for a short while so some season 4 stuff can happen. If you noticed I am making a half assed attempt at keeping both stories as non conflicting as possible.
So far I have a small idea what it will be about, but need to work out some major things and actually start writing… I like to have a minimum of 3 buffer chapters before I start posting anything, it leaves me time to make major tweaks if I decide the story should take another turn and keeps the readers from update withdrawals if I am running slow on my work.
Oh gods…
I just looked at how much I wrote in this reply. Shutting up now.
How did i overlook this story so long?! It has blueberry muffins!
Well you got me interested in the story, i hope i get the time to read thru it soon.
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Strange thing to get excited about? But you started out by reading Dr. Whooves: TRoE (Which I pulled the clop from) so just be prepared for all of the shameless clop in Penchant...
Still loving it!!!!!
Just so you know, I enjoyed it immensely. Many a time I have read mlp clop that is warm and loving. Rarely do I find anything with Celestia and Discord in such a passionately evil side chapter as this was. Oh, and it is Discord's fault bc he did ask for a second and longer chapter. I know that this comment is coming weeks late, but I hope that you see it soon and feel the large amount of praise I am giving you for such an excellent chapter in what is turning out to be one of the greatest mlp clop fictions I have ever read. Thank you so much.
Avid FimFiction reader.
Fuzzywolf123
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Just you wait until I start posting Predilection, the sequel. I just have to work out my storyline and how to make it flow nicely even with clop. It is currently in the brainstorming process.
One thing about Penchant is that most people would consider a majority of the clop (Discord chapter excluded as it was a semi-nc gender bend) to be relatively 'vanilla' clop scenes.
For Predilection I will be expanding my writing and my own comfort zone to involve kinks in an attempt to keep each clop scene something unique.
Feel free to continue commenting at any point.
Yet another astoundingly good chapter. I'm eating these up.
7 weeks late.... Ike already knows that they had sex lives before he arrived and he should also assume that he can't satiate the libidos of six extremely horny mares by himself. So they have to fuck other stallions or everyone would go crazy.
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Yup, there are some people who disliked that chapter, but that is my mentality on it all. Yes he likes/loves them, but pony society and a ratio of males to females dictates sharing.
Also, more than seven weeks late ;) (7 weeks for this site, yes… but Penchant was started 10 months ago and completed 5 months ago over on sofurry.com) I never mind comments though!
1st chapter impression: it was fantastic! Though nothing geys serious, it is off to a great start. It has acceptional playback, faint foreshadowing, pg13 moments, and best of all, MUFFINS!!!
If only there was a song link or an actual song to represent that moment...
This was a good clopfic. It started happy, got good n' saucy, and had a happy ending. (Wink wink nudge nudge, "happy ending"). This is very good in contrast to other clopfics that only consist of a long moment of gorry rape and then an end. Good job you, give yourself a cookie!
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Yeah, I have heard that comment before. If only I had money to buy some music software (wouldn't know what to get though). I would love to get into that kind of thing, I do have quite a musical background.
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Some ponies are into the Extreme Fetish, not my place to judge. I have to say even though the sequel will be a little more kinky I will continue to avoid the extreme (and frankly disgusting categories of clop... oops there I went judging. I will not write gore outside of combat)
Fun fact, Penchant was originally supposed to end out a tragedy... But some things were going on in my life back then and I just couldn't handle yet another sad ending. So due to the lucky fact I didn't kill off the character I can write a sequel. (I might post an intro chapter to it soon, not sure yet.)