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ThunderCracker


They're gonna mess up my FUCKING TOMATOES.

Comments ( 19 )

It was written well.
Though a description of Dante would have been nice. You don't even mention that he is human. Sure you kinda said so in the description, but it should have been mentioned in the actual story.
Some backstory would have been nice too.

3280504 I could edit that later if you like.

Hmm. Short but sweet.

Anyways, Dante needs some more fleshing out. What's his backstory — and more importantly, how did he get wings and become a Wonderbolts cadet?

Short and to the point Clop. Probably would have been better to just leave Dante a pony though.

Sort and Sweet.
Good jod. :twilightsmile:

short sweet and to the point. just ur average pointless clop. Me likey.

id love to see this turned into a serious fic. not many HIE fics that pair with Spitfire

3311062 Hmm, never thought of it, but I shall consider it.

BRD

Q: How did a human like Dante get wings? :applejackconfused:

3391444 I think it's a Human'ized/ Anthro story, just without the tag

No it says it in the summary he's a human and Celestial gave him wings

3393140 Thank you for noticing that. I was about to call them retards. :ajbemused:

3394088 I'm not usually one for clopfics, but this was better than I expected. Nice work.

'Dante' is a pretty swedish name i would bielive

Some what comical question...would Rainbow Dash be jealous of Spitfire or Dante?
We may never know!

"Oh fuck!" He gasped. He began thrusting in and out of Spitfire with perfect rhythm, she wrapped her fore hooves around the back of Dante's neck.

"Oh fuck, Dante, please don't stop, you feel so good." She moaned.

She let her head hang back moaned loudly. Dante spun Spitfire around onto her stomach and continued to fuck her on the desk. Spitfire's wings spread out and she moaned loudly with her wingboner. Dante had already held his wingboner down for to long. His wings flared and he began to fuck harder and faster. He grabbed the base of Spitfire's wings and began revving them like handlebars.

"OH, SWEET CELESTIA THAT FEELS SO GOOD!" She shouted.

Dante continued to rev Spitfire's wings while thrusting into her.

"Oh shit, I'm about to cum. Dante I'm about to c-c-cum!" She shouted.

You should probably rethink your life before you ever think to write anything like this again.

After Dante is gifted his wings from Celestia, he was born to fly on-the-spot.

And this just makes me want to strangle something even more.

I don't know what's going on here, and this reminds me of a cheap porno video you'd find on redtube.

Feh, this is one of those anomalies that gets a ton of upvotes despite being very, very bad. I'm not even going to go into why it's bad, unless you, the author, would like me to critique it so that you can improve.

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