4260413 He's a spammer.

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I don't mind. It's already good as hell!

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Okay, now the chapter is completed.

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The chapter is even better now :-D Im looking forward for AJ chapter ;-)

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Well, you were warned, sugar.

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Thank you, I'm happy to see you're enjoying it, it gives me more inspiration to write more.

Anyways, I should explain a few pointers for you:

Firstly, the chapters that aren't visible are the ones I haven't started, yet.

Secondly, I tagged this as 'On Haitus' because this story will only be updated every week or two, meaning updates aren't as common, therefore I'm busy on other projects.

4526782 Ah, I see for everything ^_^ So...I can only say that I'll read the rest as soon as I can, and of course, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters that have yet to be written as well!

1) Сhapters are too small( Would really prefer them longer. Right now. personally for me, the action ends several sentences after start.
2) Horses have navel? Didn't know that.

Really like your story though, even some things are just "eeeeew" for me.

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I tend to keep my chapters approximately 800-2000 words, as I can only work with limited content per-chapter, otherwise I'd risk having a writer's block, which isn't easy to recover from.

Also, I apologise for the illogical anatomy, but it's just something that many people expect to see in these sort of stories, and I personally believe it shouldn't detract anyone from the story, itself ( Obviously not if it's something he/she isn't into. )

Anyway, despite my reasoning, I appreciate the criticism, sugar... Well--A logical, constructive criticism, anyway.

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I can only guarantee, at-most a small cameo in a later chapter, but that will probably be within the near-end content of the story.

So, is this story dead, or still ongoing? It's become one of my favorite unaware stories, with the condom entrapment scene being one of my absolute favorite macro moments I've read.

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I'm too busy to continue this at the moment, but when the time comes, I'll finish it.

sequel. ?

Ever coming out of hiatus? I did with Moon Doesn't Care about Size.