• Member Since 12th Oct, 2014
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MacroPoneAnon


Comments ( 15 )
GMD

Eh. :applejackunsure:

GMD

5131333 No, I ate a cookie and I'm choking. :pinkiegasp:

GMD

Whoops, added ur story to a bad group. Lemme change dat lol, wrong group.

5131337

I... I suppose you should be more cautious whilst eating, I guess.

oh fuck that fic , i had the huge misfortune of reading it many years ago , im still trying to forget it......

5131448

I apologise for any questionable imagery I've given you from this.

I do understand that stories like these are for certain audiences, and for that, I'm sorry you found this.

I really enjoyed this, :yay: though I am more of a soft-core vore and macro fan. :twilightblush: But this was good, keep up the good work :pinkiesmile:

Here we go, this is the good one. I remember this being one of the first macro pony stories I read, and I still love it.

The build up to each death is great, and all taunting just adds to their hopeless situation. There's just enough detail, and the deaths are great.

Of course, the grammar still needs improvement, and while there is just enough detail, a little more would be good.

In the end, this is still one of my favorites.

I just... What was the influence here?lol

I've read this before. Like, this EXACT story, word for word. Are you CobaltBrony?

It was good, had a bit more potential, but it was good. From celery to French fry, this was about carrot. :ajsmug:

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