Gilda has some trouble dealing with her new feelings for Dash. Meanwhile, Twilight learns about the magic of emotion.
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Apart from a few errors in capitalisation. Content wise, this looks to be a pretty interesting story. I look forward to more. Allow me to be your first follower. I'm not generally a fan of Gilda in any kind of story. But looking at this one. I might have made an exception. I shall favourite this to see how it unfolds.
100 views ALREADY!? WOW! Thank you all so much! I'm starting the second chapter, so don't worry. I'll try and make it better than the first one!
Whoa. Brutal.
Heh. Nice story! Nice Gilda too, I'm curious to see how this will play out! You've surely gotten a favorite.
Ahh.. I happened to notice this mistake though..
"Gilda, this Pinkie Pie." Trying to make a good impression to the Pegasus, the griffon glided down from the cloud.
There should be an is after this.
PrincessLuna123 thank you for telling me. My computer is a bit buggy and will skip letters sometimes
LIK IF U CRI EVRYTIM!
I am enjoying this story, keep up the good work :D
Wow, this is so much better than I expected!
What is up with all those downvotes???
I really loved this chapter, it has been a long time since i saw some interesting and well-portrayed OCs.
Maybe the pacing is a little too fast and this chapter could have been a little longer, but whatever. Keep them coming, I literally cannot wait for the next chapter!
>>Skunkiss Thank you! I'm excited for chap 3 too!
Woah... it's gonna be tough for Gilda to be forgiven from that...
The effects of being drunk
Gilda won't find it easy to become Rainbow's girlfriend now.
Uhmmm... yeah, well, that was unexpected
If you ask me, that was really way over the top... would have done the same if she just beat Pinkie up real bad...
But really? Broken spine, broken airway? In a wheelchair for years?
You almost lost me at that point, a little violence would have been ok, and maybe a little more if it was well prepared, but this just came out of nowhere and felt very rushed
Don't worry, it won't be as bad for Pinkie as you think.
4282731 It doesn't matter. What Gilda did is a crime and must be punished... a couple of months in jail will do.
). It's gonna be tough 
.
And then, maybe then, try to be forgiven (and loved
>> Ferjamol
Hmmm... I'll see what I can do. I just think that making Gilda get arrested would make the story drag on and on. But she'll get what's coming to her, don't worry.
Although I enjoy this story, I do feel like the whole idea/plot of Gilda attacking Pinkie and everyone getting over it so quickly just a little odd...
4294354 wait till Dash finds out.
Rainbow, once again rushing into things.
Think before you act Dash.
Nooooooo why did the hero get arrested
4296102 because she sent Pinkie to the hospital remember
4296147 still its messed up
4296156 Well it is her story, so just let her write what she wants! (The BEST story ever!!! Good job Mitten Patty!)
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Thank you!
( P.S. my story isn't the BEST, but I'm glad you think so )
Now would be a good time for a hot and steamy miracle.
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I also, can not wait for that miracle.
are you going to write a story about the 3 pony or what ever that is in the cover art for this story
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No, I don't think so. That was just one of the only images of Dash and Gilda together I could find.
Sorry!
4337412 ok and that ok
I'm sorry but... well, how are either of these things any indication of her preferred bed warmer?
I suppose because she didn't enjoy doing feminine things and was usually doing things a dude would do.
( like staring at flanks )
A sequel?
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No, but you can imagine what happens next.
4341710 Hey, that was a really great story! I love how you have almost written a script for the actual 5th episode from season 1, and the started developing your story from there, making it dramatic, intriguing and totally interesting to read. Thank you so much for writing it, it was a great experience.
P.S. If you're strictly against writing a sequel, you might at least consider including the couple of RD and Gilda in your other fics as the side characters. That would be nice.
Hmm. A good retelling of the episode, though I'm wondering why you have Rainbow Dash call Gilda 'Gene' instead of just 'G' or 'Gee'. Where would she even get the idea to call Gilda Gene?
Thus far, other than that typo, looks good. Gonna start the next chapter now.
~BattyFox
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I fully expect RD to have a serious response, maybe even overboard, but everyone else seem to be treating the entire ordeal like a light breeze. I know love and tolerate, but you don't tolerate attempted murder. Where are the guards!? Where is the Flutter-rage?! Twilight should be dark magic attacking Gilda until there are no remains! It's excess violence, but that stage was reached with Pinkie's motionless body. I don't think Celestia would take to kindly to an element bearer being nearly killed.
12 moons? She has to leave for twelve days.? That's it.......WTF was everyone sad for go home for a week and a half and come back lol wow
It's a good story but the author omits so many words throughout the story like in this chapter "the purple was taken back by her friend's sudden aggression." I'm assuming the author waned to say purple unicorn/mare but left it out.
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Well technically Gilda should have thought before she acted first. But you're right. Rainbow Dash should have also thought before she acted. And so begins the vicious cycle of acting without first thinking about what you are going to be doing.
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I assume it's 12 years... Meaning 12 full moons.
5532269 haha! 12 full moons is about 1 year, not 12 years. Its a monthly occurrence. xD
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Lol, I don't know why I got confused like that. Thanks for the correction. :P
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Your profile pic is perfect for that part of your comment!
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What would twelve blue moons be then?