It starts as an ordinary, warm morning in Ponyville. But soon after all the little ponies get up from their beds something terrible happens: The sun suddenly vanishes from the sky. There are not even the stars or the moon to give light, darkness is a perfect blanket above all Equestria. Our little heroes decide to visit Zecora in hope of getting an explanation for what is happening. But not even the wise zebra knows what brought darkness. And just then, they realize they lost Pinkie.
UPDATE (2016/06/13): Starting soon, I am completely rewriting the story. It is going to be completely changed, and written as a new story. So this one will not be updated and will be deleted by the end of summer.
Chapters (5)
Not to sound rude, but who the heck is Ratiry?
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Oops. I'll correct it. ^^" Thanks for pointing it out.
So, uhm... Nopony eats breakfast, I suppose.
And surely some unicorns in Ponyville know a light spell or two, in addition to the lanterns.
Cool premise. *clicks next chapter*
I for one find the plot quite interesting!
Such a shame that there aren't any reviews, though.
Other than a few typos here and there, the story hasn't got many mistakes! :)
Keep up the great work and hope you update soon! :D
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You're right, those are some mistakes I didn't see (you know, and author is often biased with her own work)... Fluttershy does eat breakfast. The rest... I dunno. ^^"
That is probably also true. Especially Twilight. But I don't think that would make much of a difference...
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. :)
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Thank you very much. :)
I think I'll update after tomorrow.
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Then don't be rude. Just say Rarity was misspelled at some point.
Unless of course that jumble really was a brain twister...
This was an interesting chapter so far! I wonder what happened to Pinkie..
A small advice, though: There are a few small mistakes I found. You could maybe find someone who could proofread the chapters before you post them. I could do that, for example.
If that's okay with you.
Can't wait to hear your response!
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I'd really appreciade your help.
I do have a proofreader, but she just tried to read it, because she's my friend, and she tried to be helpful, but she is really not into ponies... So I guess she just gave up on reading it. So yeah, i pretty much need a proofreader. Thank you very much.
MORE!
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I'll continue it as soon as I've seen some more episodes. I am always worried that I don't know enough of the MLP universe, and I'll write something stupid. ^^"
I am glad you like the story.