I enjoyed this.

What an amazing fic, I really loved reading it.

The only thing that peeves me in this is the fact that you used this(&) instead of the word "and". Other than that, loved it. Really funny especially when you mentioned the whole "kink" concept. I hope you will write more like this(except for the clop part, maybe...)

I donot know how I feel about this fic....

...what?

No, seriously. What?

Also, I presume Burn Warden is Flash Sentry's R63'd version, correct?

...

I need to sleep, I hear the birds chirping outside...
*looks at clock, it reads 6 in the morning*
Sleep is for the weak anyway!

-Zeph

Not a bad one. Will there be a Barb/Spines fic one day soon /

4265825 4 days later and I was ready to say that.

not bad. it could be more descriptive (but I do tend to lean towards longer stories.)

(before reading) UGH, more R34 to be booked marked. Well, might as well see if it's any good.
(after) MAKE MORE!

Fix this please! There is so much potential.

What. The. Heck did I just read?

4952100 BOOM! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!

4958539 serelisly

I don't know if this was meant to be a troll fic or if you're just that bad of a writer.

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Hello? I'd like to join the club."
"Dusk Shine?"
"Yeah, it's me, and I brought my submissive girlfriend with me! Come in & introduce yourself."

what is this even supposed to be? I'd say this looks more like a story prototype schematic for a story