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Two horned unicorns?
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Why is it even up for contest. This is a good story. And fuck the Amerifags that are doe voting this for not understanding the dialogue
4489123 I think people might be downvoting more for the lack of clop in a mature fic marked for sex. It is highly interesting, far as I've read, at least.
4487262 And it turns out the bicorns are secretly the biproducts of the satanic ritual. PLOT TWIST!
4489123 While I am glad that you like it, please refrain from insulting people that downvoted the story. They are certainly entitled to their opinion. There could be many reasons for these downvotes, and unless they manifest, we won't know for sure.
Still, thank you for coming to our defense.
4489191 You made a good point here. After discussing it with my collab partner, we did come to the conclusion it came off as a tease and changed it. And, of course, we will do our best to keep you interested.
Okay you seem to have a knack for dialogue. And, what's more, the bicorn angle is an interesting concept. However, there is one problem I'd like to address with this story. Aside from the somewhat nice moment with the foal (Pipsqueak I think it was), I'm not seeing any real reason to connect with the main characters.
4516181 Hmmmm...
Well, we are aware of the amount of dialogue vs descriptions in this fic. It's something we want to work on more, polish it.
About the characters though, I'm not sure what to tell you here. We decided that we would use a somewhat slower pace to have the readers discover more every chapter, and that includes Pierre and Edward. They'll have their moments.
In any case, thank you for sharing your opinion with us. We appreciate it.
Nice work.
4563247 Thank you. It's always nice to hear some appreciation.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Don't stop update trains awaiting.
Silly brony! One does not simply "magic" ones self through the dimensions!
Man, Edward is pretty rude isn't he?
Hmm and here we were expecting Celestia to approach Luna for a little spying session...
I'm surprised they haven't attempted magic yet, usually that's the third thing anyone tries when becoming a horned pony. Meh, must be too distracted in their bickering.
Keep going! ;)
4587952 jes, because that's stopped anyone else from doing so...ever....lol
4571222
4571340 Working on it. Pleased to see you want more.
4588043 Edward is also a man that was transformed into a talking animal and taken away from his homeworld.
Eh, the twin horns kind of killed the impression they have magic. Or maybe it didn't. Either way, it's not really going to make that much of a difference.
Hooray new chapter! Also weird that twilight asked what kind of mares they liked xD
Shit will hit the fan.
The fact that twilight is taking so much liberty in their arrangements in ponyville, the fact they always have a fucking guard with them all the time (except for this chapter because he was laid off for the day), and the fact that they are being treated like diamonds brings me back to the description of the story, they are 'precious', need to be tread with care, cause apparently the pony declaration of independence (if there is one) doesn't apply to them because they are a separate species.
And I can't believe twilight took too much liberty in buying them a house! That's for them to decide!
This was a really nice chapter by the way, albeit it was a bit of a wait.
Also did anyone find this quote particularly disturbing?
Keep the train rolling and I'll keep reading.
So what, are mares much less fertile than we expected or something? Why else would the mention of a lifestyle of continuous impregnation be considered uncouth? Hmm....
It seems Twilight is being a little presumptuous on how long they are staying. Almost as if she doesn't want to believe they don't belong. Is their species so rare that saving it is more important than correcting a universe's hiccups?
Keep going! ;)
Is anyone else getting the vibe that all hell will break loose and demon bicorns will rain from the sky?
Eh... probably just me.
4815069 With the way we're going...it's only a matter of time...
Those poor bastards xD, bring luck to others besides themselves it seems lol
4988602 Personally it makes me think of Rain Man...lol
Soooooo....... What are they donating exactly?
4989020 due to their race being rare, they are being set up for mates either through mares ( which is what is happening) or a donation center which could of happen instead if their luck didn't suck so bad xD
4989078 I enjoy how on top of the lore you are dear sir...lol
Wow, Twilight should really learn a bit more tact!
For a second I thought I was in the wrong story, didn't know it was a dancerdaydream.
We wonder how all the stallions and mares will react when they realize they don't even want to reproduce!
Keep going! ;)
4989078 but why did they think enjoy pony ville while it lasts?
4989078 Yup, though saying their luck is bad might be slightly misrepresentative.
4990870 They didn't think they were going to be set up like this. Now I doubt they could enjoy their stay if they wanted to.
4990233 I'm sure being more tactful would make the news easier to digest.
Also, not getting the dancerdaydream thing.
Aaaaaand, finally, that's certainly a thing to wonder, right? What do you do with ponies that don't want to do their part, hmmm?
I think Twilight's in a bit of a bind: you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make them drink.
She can set them up with mares, and the mares in question might expect to be banged... but if the two just refuse, there isn't much she can do to force them to stud.
"What are you gonna do, rape us?"
Cue horrified looks, if I understand the characterization right.
Lock them up "for their own safety"? That would backfire decisively and spectacularly.
If they just decide walk out of Ponyville, there's not much that can be done: the guard won't do anything to hurt them, and if they try and use magic to block their escape... well, Spurglord Sparkle can't be there 24/7.
If they decide to make the ponies' lives a living nightmare, they've kind of gotten the upper-hand.
God. How I feel for those stallions. I remember the first time I accidentally walked into one of those things. It was horrible.
Uhh. Never again.
4992821 so very, very, very true
4992285 Now, there's an interesting argument here. Can Twilight force them? That's still up in the air so far.
However, if they do decide to leave, where can they go? They don't know the roads, they don't have any money, they don't even have skills as ponies to earn it. At least, they can always eat grass, if you can imagine them being willing to do that (they'd have to be pretty freaking hungry).
And, most importantly, they want to go back home. There aren't many characters they know of that could possibly help them with that. And most of them are linked to Twilight Sparkle.
Yes, get a new Ally! Who knows, you might even be able to take her with you when you return! That... Actually seems like a really good course of action actually. Spoilers! ;p
Keep going! ;)
Been waiting to see whether they'd act like men, or mice.
Ed stands up to Twilight. Pierre goes around her. Nice to see neither of them rolling over for her.
Have an upvote, and a reptile with facial hair.
The suspense.
Aldo, as they can(presumably) eat grass, why don't they just loan a few starting books about magic, then about illusions and then just escape at night? I'm pretty sure that single guard has to sleep at some point...
5181865 hohoho... Someone is making assumptions about what bicorns can do... No worries my dear lad, things are just getting started.
5181771 And the shipping begins. Just as planned!
5181790 I will cherish this draconic being and its active pilosity. Thank you, good sir. Have this vital organ of an enemy of mine in return.
5181865 I do not recall saying bicorns are capable of using magic. Unless... are you implying they should beat Chainmail up with books while he is asleep? Such an evil idea... I love it.
5181935 Ouch, were you one of the participants in the thread where I was called an 'eldritch horror'?
Cuz that condescending style brings back memories.
5185249 I don't have a clue what you are talking about...but as someone who knows all that is going to transpire I was merely making a friendly jab...I apologize if it came off as mean-spirited...lol
5183319
That's the thing, you didn't say it...
And no, I don't like nor promote violence, I'm one of those 'Love & Tolerate' guys.
And, if they can't use magic(which I say they can), then just sneak out or jump out of the >omg so high<(just in case saying, that was sarcasm) 2nd story window, of course check what's below the window and where the guard sleeps first.
5185258 No problem, do you want to see the thing I was talking about? The thread I mean? I am somehow, even if I have deduced many mistakes on my part, still proud over it, proudest thing in my life actually XD.
5185265 Taking that whole...aim high shoot low thing to heart arn't we...lol
5185268 I have no idea what you mean, quite literally, English isn't my mother tongue.
Anyway, decided to give you the link anyway, its a long thread, idk if you'll want to read it all, most of the fun starts at Page 2:
www.fimfiction.net/group/822/humans-arent-bastards/thread/31700/the-bambi-syndrome-or-overromanticizing-and-idealization-of-animals-and-nature
5185268 I have no idea what you mean, quite literally, English isn't my mother tongue.
Anyway, decided to give you the link anyway, its a long thread, idk if you'll want to read it all, most of the fun starts at Page 2(although, if you want to understand it all, read from the beginning):
www.fimfiction.net/group/822/humans-arent-bastards/thread/31700/the-bambi-syndrome-or-overromanticizing-and-idealization-of-animals-and-nature
5185278 all i meant was you chose a funny thing for your most proud moment...lol and thanks for the thread...i guess.
5185487 Uh, yeah, I did, um, welcome, I guess, I think I am the proudest over this because I personally somehow had fun whilst writing the responses >_> idk how that works.
Also, the pink side of your avatar is more profit.
5186616 not gonna lie...i have very little idea what that quip about my avatar means...