"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004
"Let Rolf understand this. The farm mare's alicorn friend can't change the shy one back to normal, and your baby growing fruit won't survive, unless Rolf, "A stallion's son of a shepherd" uses his knowledge on vamponies to turn her back?"
"*Sigh* eeyup"
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I enjoy the concept so far. It could use some better formatting in paragraphs (such as a new paragraph each time the speaker changes). I'll be waiting for more of it.
My gods, the potential is insane!
ROLF/AJ NEW OTP!
Just kidding. But there IS potential here. the format and the plotline are a bit lacking, but this could be something funny. Read later to track.
~Dash The Stampede
4182172 Agreed.
Applejack and pony/Rolf?.....
GENIUS! {It must be done.}
But you need to work on this a little more. Separate the dialogue. (Only one character should speak within a paragraph, otherwise it confuses the reader.) I would also suggest to try and add a little more. I know certain authors like short chapter, but given the potential with this, there is so much you can do with it. Remember to add in as much description as you need, but not too much as that might bore the reader.
The dialogue in of itself is spot on for the characters. I can't wait to see where you take this. *favorite, upvote, track*
this awsome grammar and formatting be damned keep this up man fav'd/thumb up'd.
Superb idea/concept. Needs more.
Formatting and plot line might use some work thought.
Still best idea I have seen in long time.
I wonder if Victor shall make an appearance?
Oh Christ, everyone hold on to your butts...
And now that I've read it, I feel my previous comment is entirely justified.
How long until a "That's my Horse" Joke?
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4191988 I meant in the story, but that's good too!
Damn it, Rolf!
No doubt about it, you got Rolf's character down.
Rolf! Rolf! Rolf!
Where's the Feather-duster of Tomfoolery when you need it?
Also, you misspelled 'really' as 'realy'
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Yeah...Watching every episode over 50 times in your life does that to ya
Oh, Rolf.... Will you ever make sense?
Upvoted for "Why the hell not?"
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Rolf is ALWAYS right.
I hope that one of Rolf's traditional cures will be hilariously able to salvage Fluttershy's soul.
4246945 Oh, God. That picture.
I got to be honest, I probably wouldnt object to being attacked by Vampire Fluttershy
4335039 even if you died?
4335150 Death by Fluttershy?.....Not a bad way to go
4335224 i like to think there are different versions of fluttershy therefore i believe this is actually vampireshy or something like that and not fluttershy and instead of dieing from kidness or cuteness i belive this death would involve lots of tearing and ripping, blood everywhere but thats just me
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That reminded me of death by snu-snu
Plus, that was adorable with how she said that she would suck on their blood until they die.
Wow, that's a lot of tension between Rolf and Applejack.
I actually feel sorry for Rolf. It kind of seems like he only talked down about her to save face with his family. He does seem to care about her and I hope he makes it up to her.
And Fluttershy's gone full vampire...That's both adorable and terrifying at the same time.
I hope I'm not the only one half expecting him to pull out a "Smackeral"...
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The dueling fish!
Also, in the beginning, homonym error (heel instead of heal).
Ahah! Rolf was my #1 favorite Ed, Edd, n' Eddy character... He was so hilarious sometimes. #2 was Eddy. Because MONEY!!!
What happened to the real Fluttershy.
4392747 a fish duel is awsome!!.
...omg, T-Trixie?
Glad to see this finish and that was a great conclusion. Very action paced with some humor and heart. Well done. {I'm guessing it's Trixie. She's one of the few mares who'd put up with Ralf.}
6768867 And third person speak as well.
Now I want a sequel where Rolf goes to Tartarus to face Tirek.
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It would've been hilarious if the last chapter began with the aftermath of Rolf clubbing Fluttershy over the head with a rock. Rock breaks rock, but rocks makes Batpony unconscious and gives her a severe concussion.
YOUR GARDEN IS OVERGROWN AND YOUR CUCUMBERS ARE SOFT!