The Shadow of a Stranger

A darkness is approaching Equestria and a stranger has arrived to bring word and help stop the darkness in any way he can but, who is he? Where is he from? And how can he help Equestria? Well, Twilight Sparkle intends to find out.

Chapters (6)

1: The Messenger · 10th Apr 2014 · 1,571 words
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2: Breaking the Rules · 17th Apr 2014 · 1,837 words
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3: Night Time Tussle · 10th Aug 2014 · 1,464 words
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4: Explanations · 29th Aug 2014 · 1,957 words
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5: Remembrances · 13th Dec 2014 · 2,300 words
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6: Tanarfal · 20th Feb 2015 · 1,905 words
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themouthofmush

themouthofmush #1 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

this seems like a promising story. i'm curious to see where you take it.

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Sugar_and_Sins

Sugar_and_Sins #4 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

4211182 Thank you. Im' glad you like it, i'm just waiting to see what everyone thinks then another chapter shall be on the way.

(Wow I messed up on the comments there, ended up replying to myself instead of you. )

themouthofmush

themouthofmush #5 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

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i'm a fan of literature my fine fellow. the more potential that i see a new one having, the more i want to see it being continued.
(kudos to that)

Sugar_and_Sins

Sugar_and_Sins #6 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

4211234 Well then, we shall see how the story goes Its not the best start with more dislikes than likes but i'm keeping hopes high.

themouthofmush

themouthofmush #7 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

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try not to think of it as that. either the people who downvoted you didn't like your story or didn't really bother reading it. most of the time it is probably the latter than the former.

Sugar_and_Sins

Sugar_and_Sins #8 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

4215545 When you say it like that it certainly makes me feel better about it, Thanks.

themouthofmush

themouthofmush #9 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

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i do my best, my fine person.

Yoshi1990

Yoshi1990 #10 · Apr 13th, 2014 · · · 1: The Messenger ·

Your story got my curiosity. I shall follow your story. I'm remaining neutral for now. No like or dislike from me.
I need to see more before making that kind of choice.