Sometimes you don't see what you want is right in front of you.
Sometimes colts are stupid.
Sometimes mares are too.
This story is about a group of friends. each of them is looking for a special some pony. What most of them don't know, is that there hearts desires lie in there best friends.
It's an interesting/funny concept! There are a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but otherwise it's fine :D
Wat .-.
Derp. That is all.
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OMG best story ever!