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AuroraSky


What more can i say? I like Ponies hence why i'm here on the site, and i like to write hence why i want to post stories to the site.

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Discord is extremely, irrevocably bored! He decides the best way to cure boredom today is to visit his favorite princess. He just wasn't expecting to find an alicorn filly in the library. Now hijinx and adventure awaits as he tries to milk the situation and her friends try to reverse the process.

I create all pictures I use in my fan-fictions, but its not always easy. I had some help with a ponybase this time. Also I don't have spell check or auto-correct on my Open Office for some reason, so I don't see any errors until they arrive here. I know my punctuational is all messed up, and I'm sorry for that. I do try.

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Comments ( 48 )

you might try installing LibreOffice OpenOffice was bought by Oracle and since then (a couple years ago) all the major developers took that codebase and forked it and called it LibreOffice. OpenOffice is basically dead now because of the fork.

4160449 Well, that makes a lot of sense actually. :derpytongue2: yuck, I dislike making sense. But thanks! I will definitely look into it.

This looks to have promise. I will be watching from the darkness...

i desire to know more...and to read more about adorable tiny!twilight

Let me help you out:
Yes. Yes it was funny.

yeah, it was a good chapter:pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:
a couple of things though

Sleeping, with a filly in the house, with the door unlocked? Even HE knew a burglar or worse... some insane Dental hygienist could walk in! His cotton candy coated teeth ached at the mere thought!

watching reruns of KND much?:duck:
also

Ripping the sleeping mask from her face, and sending opal flying. Rarity quickly looked to her hand.

hoof, maybe?

4166801 Not quite sure about the KND part? I was actually thinking of Minuette, who was given the new name of 'Colgate' by bronies. Since Discord Never brushs his teeth it was a small joke about how insane she gets around him.

The hand thing, i'm editing that part now. :facehoof: I can't believe i missed that when I reread the chapter.

what you've written seems to be a combination of both obsession and fetish, either way it's disturbing when combined with Twilight

Twilight is devious, heck she just got two freinds within minutes of each instance, with the same gag

I am so glad I followed this, this is getting interesting:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

also, try getting an editor to go over this one, lots of missed words and whatnot

4170667 Thanks :scootangel: As pinkie pie would say, 'the fun is getting started' :pinkiecrazy: As for an editor, i really would agree, i just don't know how to go about contacting somepony to assist me with such.

I have a Ketchup Fetish. I still haven't figured out what it does yet though.:pinkiehappy:

Well done on another good chapter. The twily speech is still throwing me off some but for the most part I hope this story turns out great! Also, I saw what you did there with courage the cowardly dog.

4178613 :pinkiehappy: Thanks, Yay! I was wondering if someone would catch on to that reference. I will be updating again either later today or tomorrow.

hair remover and Angel Bunny? I like this combo:pinkiecrazy:! sadistic little prick

The dialogue in this one seemed a little blunt, but overall it holds up fine. Spike acting as an infodump is acceptable, but reactions from everypony about the situation are bland.
Still an enjoyable chapter, though.

“my my Twilight! Aren't you a bit...young..”

Try to spot all the little mistakes you made.

AAAAAAAAAAH!
Sorry, too many mistakes for my taste. :twilightangry2:

4191171 Yeah...For that I'm sorry, :applejackunsure: My family and i are in the middle of moving. Rainbow Dash taking the lead like that, is a bit out of character in my opinion.

I'm laughing already... and I can totally see the CMC begging Discord for a permanent Chocolate Rain Cloud to store in their club house!

EVIL! EVIL FILLY TWILIGHT!!!:pinkiecrazy: Such fun reading:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Very amusing pranks on Rainbow... and I almost pity Shining Armor if little Filly Twilight did that to him.... with his white coat it must have been a weeks worth of baths before he got the stains out.

I forgot about this story until now. I really likes it, but please don't make us wait that long.

Filly Twilight is still adorable and mischevious, especially if she keeps recruiting the Crusaders to help her in her pranks.

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Well there is good news, I'm terribly sorry for making you wait so long. Good news, the story is nearly done. I'm crossing my fingers that the final chapter will be up tomorrow. If not then, the next day.

Man, Filly Twilight is on a role with her pranks!

4183927 Yes indeed... continue on little Filly and make the bunny hairless!:twilightsmile:

I'm guessing Filly Twilight would be able to make Nightmare Moon, Sombra, and Chrysalis all curl up in a corner sobbing at the same time. I can't wait to see the prank she has planned for Shining Armor.

“I have just the came to play!” He told her and with a snap of his fingers the library truly became empty.

It's game not came.

Great Story:twilightsmile:

Awesome story:rainbowdetermined2: I cant wait till next update :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Thank you so much, I will edit that right now.

LOL LOVE IT:rainbowlaugh: i really really REALLY :pinkiehappy: can't wait for the next chapter:raritystarry:

OH YEAH We are SO needing answers to all this, but it was a fun ride with just this though.:pinkiecrazy:

..... SHINING ARMOR UOU IDIOT!!! YOU DONT MAKE A PONY HEAR THE OPPOSITE OF WHAT SOMEPONY IS SAYING, ESPECIALLY A FILLY!!! :flutterrage:

That part of the explanation a big blotch of sad in the middle of an otherwise perfect chapter. But it appears Twilight still has a prankster filly mentality and an adult mare body....

I want to thank all those reading it, or have read it. The story is complete but the Sequel Will be posted in a few days (hopefully) This will go from Adventure to more sad/dark/random theme. and after i do another check on rating, it may change that part as well.

OH please do a sequel this was hilarious.:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

“You won that round,” He agreed having heard Celestia's cry from inside the boutique. Twilight merely beamed.

Correct me if I'm wrong but wasn't it Rarity screaming in the boutique?

How Celestia and Luna's parts fit in there is also a bit confusing to me but so far this has been hilarious.

Please write a sequel this is an awesome story.

Discord is extremely, irrevocably bored!

ok then discord u got me stumped as much as twilight

holy cow thats funny!!!!!!!!!

ok confusing and funny at the same time

Okay, uh, one question. How did she become a filly?

fear the ketchup. sequel! or epilogue!

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Sad day, years later, author is gone not long after last chapter.

From the author note I guess you were thinking of make a sequel that you give up?

so now Discord is taking care of twilight now, very interesting

ha-ha Discord you got 'H' a few more and you'll lose

why do I feel like twilight is going to prank angel bunny?

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