Twilight Sparkle falls down a really steep hill, and gets severely injured and is in critical condition, when she finds out it will take her a few years to fully recover, she lose's all hope and wants to give up, but her friends wont let her because they know she can get through this hard time in her life. When Princess Celectia finds out what has happend, she becomes very worried, and is very bussy with royal duties, not being able to watch over her faithful student 100% of the time, she sends princess Luna to watch over her. Twilight Sparkle can't wright her friendship report's, so Princess Luna has to take over for her, Luna soon discovers that this is a-lot harder the she expected it to be.
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This is why we can't have nice things.
That...That description...That title....It burns us... It bUrNs uS!
I couldn't even get past the first few... what are they called? My mind can't think from the stupid. If this isn't a troll fic... it just better be a troll fic.
Obvious troll is obvious. Y U NO SUBTLE?
DOUBLE SPACING STRAIGHT ACROSS THE PAGE
No, seriously, this is unreadable, both in formatting and in prose,
I'm not pleased boutz thiz, re-write it! No...its scrap
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My friend A.P. says that...
KILL IT WITH FIRE!
KILL IT WITH FIRE!
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Seeing as this fic will probably get deleted...anyone want to play Cluedo in the comment section?
The rules are pretty easy:
One of the users who has already posted is the murderer.
His victim, this fic.
We must find him before he kills more fics!
Double spaced, centered, uncapitalized chapter and story names, and the worst description I have ever seen. I'm never this critical, it's just... that must have taken forever to format.
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It's not called Cluecheesi?
The formatting is like a hundred drunken lawyers wearing underwear stuffed with hornets.
I honestly wanna see more. You just gotta read it at a quick pace. Don't stop or pause; just keep going til you get to the end of the story.
Plus I really hope Twilight recovers.
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It was all nicely done in Microsoft Word, but when i pasted it in to the
website it messed up the formatting. I know what you mean
sorry for all the errors, i have a disability thats makes it hard to wright a-lot, and i hit the wrong keys a-lot.
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I use Notepad instead for that very reason. It's bare-bones, yes, but it isn't going to lie about the formatting. I can't recommend it if you make lots of typos due to lack of spell check, though, but give it a shot if you want.
As for errors, use a browser that includes spell check, and triple-check everything before you publish.
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Then I'll paste it in to text edit aka word pad for the Mac, sorry for boasting its just I love iMacs 
I'll try that on the next chapter, but I'll wright it with word just becaus it's much easyer for my hands, they get tired really fast.
Just set the view size to small, then it doesn't do the dumb center thing
1560287 When do u expect the next chapter of the story to be released. i really want to see twilight get better
It says complete but I would love to see more
Can you please continue this i would love to see more chapters. I love it i added it to my favorites