Collab with The Abyss (Chapters 1 and 2)
Proofread by Neko Majin C and edited by The Abyss (Chapters 3 onwards)
Twilight Sparkle has always ignored Hearts and Hooves Day, seeing it as just another normal day with extra chocolate and the occasional broken-hearted friend to comfort. But when Rarity convinces her that not having a date during the holiday is contrary to proper princess protocol, Twilight rushes to do everything in her power to live up to the expectations presented to her.
There’s just one problem, though: Twilight has never been on a proper date before.
After a few rather disastrous attempts to find a date in Ponyville, Twilight goes to her mentor in Canterlot in a last ditch effort in the hopes of finding the answers she seeks. Princess Celestia, however, may have something more for her than either of them had anticipated.
So sweet! I can't wait for more!
Bravo!
even after everything in ponyville twi,
not everything can be done scientifically.
This could have been a clopfic in so many ways, yet it wasn't... good job.
This sounds like fun. Good job.
4255930 Twilight appreciates that, but she also can't help but approach such a scary subject (to her, at least) from a place outside her comfort zone. By reducing it to a science first, she can approach it as a social norm more easily.
AWESOME Start to this story Abyss looking forward to reading the rest.
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Well its an awesome start To the story Collab story still looking forward to reading the rest
4256124 Thank you. I don't mean to pick on you or anything, just hoping to point out that I exist early on so people don't keep commenting about the story as if it was all just Abyss.
4256200 You did a good job too.
*flutterhugs*
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*hugs are returned*
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Good start, you two - keep it up!
From the description and setup I was picturing something along the lines of A Warm Summer's Evening, only more intentional on Celestia's part. It'll be interesting to see where this goes, and from what I see so far, I'm in for the duration.
This was adorable, I look forward to reading more.
KBO.
Wow...
"I've got a feeling! A feeling deep inside. Oh yeah. Oh Yeaaaah!
I've got a feeling! A feeling I can't hide. Oh yeah. Oh Yeaaaah!"
I love it
. More please
4255965 I know right! It makes me so happy. And yet so sad. I get so giddy over all the possible romance, and yet so sad because I will never see Celestia bend Twilight over a desk and really teach her how to be a good student
Oh, gods so much d'aww and hnnnggggh.....
MOAR.
I WILL THREATEN YOU.
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I wonder how hard it would be for the site admins to add multi-author ownership support to stories.
AwkwardTwi and GoodNaturedTrollestia going on romance adventures? Yeah, I'm in.
Suddenly I see Twilight strapping prospective dates into a repurposed Pinkie Sense analyzer and then graphing their brain activity to gauge their suitability for romance.
This could be amusing.
Twilestia? Nah man, you should ship Rainbow Dash instead. Twilight is an incredibly shallow character that shouldn't really exist.
4256915 In my head, that was the first part of her attempts to find a date in Ponyville. The second involved que cards. For both ponies.
4256356 Thank you!
Oh Twi, this is one math problem you can never solve.
This is an awesome story so far.
I like how Celestia basically managed to beat Twilight at her own game
Am I the only one who can see the answer to twilight's problem is currently present?
I'm liking this so far, though I feel like I already know where this will go and have spoiled the story for myself before I even read it
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is this how you feel towards all mlp characters or something? How are you even a brony?
You have my attention
4257885 He's trolling (badly). Go check his profile. It out and out says he posts comments just so he can get under people's skin. I would have deleted his comments, but Abyss is the person who owns the story.
4257959 he did the same with my latest Fic, which is actually in the featured box, which makes it even more insulting.
On top of that, he didn't even read the Fic, just said the same thing about scoots as he did twi here. Then when somepony told him to not comment if he hadn't read the story he clearly said he hadn't read it and didn't care about the story anyway, so I replied, telling him if he as not going to comment on the Fic at all and just rate about scoots not meant to be in the show, he can go do it on a discussion board because I wasn't interested in hearing his crap
Sorry, just needed to get that out of my system
4258013 For some reason there is nothing in the site-wide rules about trolling/starting drama, unlike at Derpibooru, but I do think you could probably nail him for "being a dick" (dear lord that's a vague rule) and get a mod to deal with him.
I myself am unlikely to do anything about it, as I find it more amusing and pathetic than infuriating or rude.
4258148 Hmm, I may be sticking my head into a beehive here, but you guys are really taking an obvious troll post really hard. It obviously doesn't mean anything, so why get upset about it? There are other things more worthy of your emotion.
4258296 Did you read the bottom half of my comment? I don't really care that much about this specific post (as I said, I find it amusing in an Epic Fail sort of way), but since this guy is doing it on multiple stories and other people are bothered by it, I would like to see him dealt with.
Wait. . .so, what's the slice of life?
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How am I trolling? I'm simply stating that Twilight is a horrible character. No need to get all butthurt about it.
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I think it speaks for itself.
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Twilight is an awesome character. Out of all the main six, she had the best character progression and had the best episodes.
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I don't know, man. I'm a pretty good troll, if I do say so myself.
adding to my alerts list.
I look forward to all of the incoming akward Twilght and Celestia moments. oh the fun to be had.
You had my curiosity.
Now you have my attention.
To cute! Rarity would VERY much approve on getting a date right away.
4258646 you are trolling because you keep commenting on other's stories with nothing but hate on characters that happen to be in the stories but. Don't seem to give a shit about the story itself.
Unless you're gonna give some comments about the story don't comment at all
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This is actually Twilight's doing.
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Meh.
I tried.