• Member Since 6th Feb, 2014
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Vladimir


I love stories, arts, and honestly, Crossovers, Like Bleach, or Naruto -very VERY little Naruto though...- Harry Potter -LOVE IT!- and more!

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so why the human tag? if there just mention in the story fine but why the tag for them?

sooooo......you've created another one eh.............whelp...just means another awsome story by you to favorite.

4144064 I am glad.
4144238 Who said they wasn't in the story? :trollestia:
4144605 Yeah. I have had this idea for a story for FAR too long. So, last night I said, "Fuck it. Let's rock!". And here it is!

4145425 oh!......and in seconds of favoring it nother chapter pops up!............you're spoiling us with how fast all your stories are getting new stuff.

4145458 be warned for if you do it too fast-
you may lose inspiration-
and you'll have to
putting stories down
on the waiting list or-
cancel them completely!

4145479 Eh, I get like that, but I listen to some music, and BOOM! New inspiration for same story! Most chapters happen thanks to me listening to music or thinking through the chapters VERY vividly in my head. Meaning I have days where my mind is NOTHING but lines and scenes for chapters.

i like this chapter and this story keep it up :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile:

4145491 hehe just like me ... can create characters...the story......background.....just not the actual dialouge.

4145603 I plan to. And thank you for enjoying my work. I am overly enjoying this story idea! :yay:

4145607 He doesn't really know...does he?
The fact that we quite literally see and feel everything? Nope.

you do realise that dash had never read daring doo until after she was put in hospital?:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

4146692 well remember history is altered in this story.Also good chapter :twilightsmile:

4146692 History of Equestria was changed. It says it in the description. Right there.

Is this any way related to the Kirin spirits from the Kamigawa block of Magic the Gathering?

Comment posted by CanterlotGuardian deleted Mar 28th, 2014

4147737 Yes. I didn't even know that Magic the gathering had Kirin's in it. would have made me look into it more.

4147741
yeah they're from the Kamigawa block. that one has a lot to do with spirits and samurai and stuff. it's all Japanese and Shinto themed.

4147741 the chapters feel a bit rushed, maybe slow down some, get a pre-reader and an editor it will definitly help.in the long run.

4147823 And like that. You have won me back over to Magic the gathering.

4147855 I like that idea, although I know it is slightly rushed, meant to feel that way from the situation of the story. However this new chapter is going to be...slower paced (still kinda rushed, but slower than I usually do with more details) and a bit more focused on the Lore and some of the fights.
I also decided to make the "Summer Sun Celebration" into a multi-chapter based part of the story, to sort of make it longer and less "Oh! We need to be friends to do this in about 5 seconds" like in the show. So, I'm making it longer and adding twists and turns, as is the master plan. To reach back home, from where the journey began.

4147925 We are talking about the cards, right?

4147929 Oh thank gods. And good, I haven't played the video games yet though, they any good?

4147936
some are, some have annoying technical issues. I much prefer the paper card game.

4147937 Ah, I see, so it's like the Yu-Gi-Oh! video games, hm?

4147944
yeah, except people actually still care about the Magic video games.

Not often do I see stories about a kirin other than my own. Not alot of people take the time to use different races besides ponies, the griffons and dragons like Spike. This'll be an interesting read

4148519 I see, the I hope you enjoy the story. I too, am a major fan of Kirin as well. I personally prefer them over many other races. I also plan on adding what I call 'Diamond Wolves' later on in the story. Anyone can use them if they want, I don't really care much, as I would like to see more races out there in the world of FimFiction Equestria. Sorry for the rant. Enjoy the story.

4148604 It's no problem at all. I actually like seeing other races be starred in stories besides the norm. It's always "ooh the mane 6. Gotta watch this story." or "ooh They're talking about the changelings. Gotta read that." It's all so boring now. Still likeable, but it gets old really fast

Eh, not bad...Spirit seems way to flawless for my preferences and you could use an editor/proofreader for some grammatical issues. All in all, I've seen worse and I've seen better. I'll probably follow in my off-time [gods know I have enough of it these days] and see where it goes. Though again, I think an editor would do you a lot of good to help smooth it all out.

"We kicked Nightmare's plot SUPER hard!"

equivalent 'we kicked Nightmare's vagina super hard'. plot should be flank. Several grammar errors throughout scentences structure could be better

good chapter "where are you going" "Back into MY kingdom"

King of the mountain and everything under it. Thorin can sense this disturbance.

4150450 Actually, plot is still the relative term meaning ass. Flank is just a softer way of saying it

For someone who's ancient he sure has a lot of mental issue still. By this point I think he would've gotten over the death.

4151816 Spirit is incredibly old, but Light had died technically thee thousand years ago, Sombra two thousand and Nightmre Moon one thousand. Since he is incredibly old, a few thousand years is pretty short.

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