I'm a student at DigiPen with some skills in music, art, programming, and particularly writing. I've written a variety of fanfics, usually involving ponies in some form or another.
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During his exploration of the Freelancer base, Caboose stumbles upon a lab of experimental Slipspace technology and does what he does best: pushes buttons. The next thing he knows, he's in a strange place talking to a tiny yellow filly and he couldn't be happier!
Inspired by DarkWing's My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic! If you think this is good, you might like My Little Caboose even more!
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Interesting concept. I didn't notice anything to off about the grammar, but I'm not the best at spotting those out. As for how you characterized Caboose, I feel you did ok, but I feel you sort of overplay he's idiocy a bit to much. I don't really know how to adequately describe it right now for lack of sleep over the past few days and not having watched much RvB recently. I'll be dropping this into my 'read later' folder to keep a watch for it.
688822
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Hmmm.. anyways! Looking good so far.. Can't really complain, spelling seems alright.. grammar.. characters seem to be in order.. etc etc.
Is it so bucking HARD to make paragraphs?
every 3 or 4 lines or when a character says something leave 1 space.
Also, the story is nice but feels a bit rushed.
688864 GRAMMAR NAZI!!!!!!!!!!!
This is pretty good, Caboose was always my favorite, so seeing him interact with the pony's without the jerks is pretty nice.
CABOOSE!!! DAFUQ DID YOU DO?!
I'm liking this! Why? It's Red vs. Blue! And it's Caboose!
Remember season ten has already started and keep an eye on roosterteeth.com for new updates.
*Spoiler 'Flashbacks'
Great story by the way.
Dis is the best red v blue fanfic ever caboose should meet
and 
Reading this for sure.. also, it seems we have advertisers now...
688849 The few people I had read it before I released it thought he was dumb enough. And if you think about it, trying to figure out Caboose's logic is, well, next to impossible.
688964 Yeah, I wanted to use the Epsilon unit but by the time I actually got started on this, Season 10 had started. So I played the Bungie BS card and used Slipspace as an excuse.
688864 Personally, I can't stand line breaks in between lines of dialogue or paragraphs. At least, that's because I was never taught to use them except to denote passage of time. I suppose it would be easier if Red vs. Blue wasn't so dialogue heavy to begin with. I'll keep that in mind!
688822 You watched that PSA, didn't you?
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689394 i love this story this is the funniest caboose story even better than what caboose did on his summer vacation with noble team
689502 Funny, I watched that while I wrote this.
I have to say, I'm impressed with how you nailed Caboose. Every time I read him saying something, I can hear his voice in my head. Interesting read. I hope to see more of this in the future.
689525 I had QUITE a few of my friends read this more than once before I released it.
688912 YOU SHALL BURN IN FIRE GRAMMAR-HATER!!!
689392
"I think I just got dumped by Caboose. This unfucking believeable!"
WHAT NONE OF THE OTHER GUYS, aww man that sucks! good story though.
690000 I might try to throw them in later.
Nice story, very nice to see a Caboose who actually stays in character, and doesn't seem to breaks the laws of equestria at the same time. Thumbs for that! I'd imagine this is applejack's face about two minutes after talking with him
Can't wait fer more
I thought Cabooses special talent was team kill?
690861 I'm not entirely sure if Caboose knows he's teamkilling. Plus, can't have him killing ponies without pushing it to a Dark rating, now can we?
690617 I'd imagine that few ponies would have the patience for Caboose's logic.
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True but they're not on his team. they're like fluffy the alien. besides there's always the respawn factor.
This kinda reminds me of my little caboose blue is magic
692543 I've drawn more than a little inspiration from My Little Caboose, but I simply wanted to see how things would play out if Caboose remained human. While I dislike the short length of MLC's chapters, the characterizations of the Blues and Reds are dead on!
Caboose is always good for a laugh, though I'd like to see how Church would react to all of this.
more please
695401 I think I can work something out with Simmons and Church to make that happen.
701700
That ought to be good.
Caboose would be great friends with Pinkie Pie. :)
On an unrelated side note, will you do more?
723112 Slowly, but definitely yes! I've got school to balance and a few other stories I'm in the process of writing.
724487 THERE IS A GOD AFTER ALL! MORE STORIES ARE ON THE WAY!
WANT MOAR WHEN DAFUQ R PART 2 COME OUT??!?!?
731221 I'm actually working on it right now
If all goes well, it should be up this evening or tomorrow afternoon.
731228 oh. that's fortunate.
All of those references to pirate ships were gold, especially with Caboose's voice in my head.
Caboose!!! You Nit wit!
Oh god, that last line had me rolling. XD
688822 first posts are banned dont say first or dont post a first pic and you wont get banned dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
OMG! Pinkie Pie and Caboose? Shit just got even more random! How is the fourth wall gonna survive if Pinkie teaches Caboose her secrets? Then again, he might not be able to learn them. But what if he can?
All i can imagine is caboose meeting derpy
! that would be the best shit EVER!
Someone! Post this on RoosterTeeth's forums! One of the guys there are a brony, so maybe it will get featured!
Twilight's gonna blow a gasket trying to understand Caboose.
689741 the new line with indent thing is how you properly start a paragraph. starting a new line with a gap between paragraphs is also 'acceptable', but much less prefered. It is hated my a great many authors when the two are mixed.
731228 i like this (especially your correct form of paragraphing). i saw you didn't use epsilon with s10 starting, but it's also already been done with My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic. but again, me likey the story
Caboose in Eqestria...
. This can't end well!