I will be on fall break for the next two weeks, so I won't have any story updates. Sorry to anyone whom has been enjoying reading them. I'll be back with Chapter 3 in 2 or 3 weeks. Have a good one everypony!
This is a take on all the episodes of the series, and a few original stories, from the eyes and point of view from many of the background ponies and my OC. Every chapter will probably have a different batch of characters that get followed around, not focusing on the Mane 6 ever.
This is also my first fanfic and first spot of creative writing in a real long time. So constructive criticism and such is highly encouraged. Hope you enjoy.
Chapters (2)
Interesting perspective you put into play. The role of a spectator in the ever exciting lives of the Mane 6 is something I wouldn't have thought of. And now I know why Lyra was in canterlot that one time and is now in ponyville. Nice. Also, is the scooter Cloud sold Scootaloo's scooter?
I really don't have any complaints; no grammar errors I could find or anything I could really critique. Not bad for your first fanfic. I do have a question though. Is cloud gonna play a major role, or is he just gonna spectate? 
Whatever. Tracking this. Also, would you mind, maybe checking out my story and leaving me some feedback? Thanks!
And one last thing. I'm the leader of a group of "rookie" authors here on fimfiction, called Rookies on the Rise, and I'd like to invite you to join. I'm trying to get new authors to post their stories in the group in the effort that other members will see the stories and get them more popular. So, I hope you'll consider joining!
Keep on writing!
very nice i like it i love when authors give the background ponies the spot light
Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback. For the scooter, I do have a plan for that latter on involving a certain filly we all know and love. And I was not planning on making Cloud take part in any of the big actions that the show follows, but who says the Mane 6 are the only ones in Ponyville allowed to have crazy adventures and such. I'm also finishing up the next chapter now, so it should be up within the week
Very cute! I hope we get to see lots more! you need to get a proofreader for your grammar though you kee mixing up "laid" and "lied" ><
"It's not like this town could get any crazier than it already is."
Cloud Surfer, you're in for a rude awakening.
Looking forward to more from you! Keep on writing!