It had been a year since Spike went on the Great Dragon Migration, and while he didn't find any of the answer he was looking for, he did find his place. Now, after making a startling discovery in the caves by Ponyville, Spike has another chance to get the answers he once longed for, but will he be able to accept the truth as he learns what it means to be a dragon assistant?
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This is only my second fanfic, so while I don't mind it being ripped apart without mercy over just about everything, please do so in a kind, loving, and toleratant manner. This is also going to be my first crack at coming up with an entirely original story, so I'm not quite sure how it will turn out, but I have an idea on where this will go.
Edit: I redid the Long description, because I realized how stupid the first one sounded after rereading it once or twice. I'm just about done setting the stage for the rest of the story. If all goes well, I should have the next chapter up next weekend. Depends on school work.
Wow, that was beautiful man. Tracking and a thumbs up.
Can't wait to see where this goes
and the misunderstanding begins.
Spike looks at letter "its gonna be a long day"
Ah yes the joys of misunderstanding
Here we go. Ha! But we get Luna, YAAY!!
Oh yea, I plan on giving Luna a good amount of time. Her final line in the season finale has inspired me. Thanks for all the encouragement, never thought people would like it that much.
YOU DO NOT HAVE MY MARK OF APPROVAL!!! i only give storys i dont like that
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Thanks for pointing that one out, I didn't notice it after posting.
It appears the lines of communication broke down somewhere.
i wonder if we get to see badass twillight in here some where and i am lagging to heck and back so im not going to checxk spelling like im finished typing this bye time i saw check
good story, although some of the characters feel out of character, most specifically rarity, and those of the apple family, where are their accents? side from these minor things good story keep it up
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I attempted to do the country accent spelling in my other fic Times in Ponyville (shameless self advertisement) but I just always felt like I just didn't have it down right. I will probably go back and fix that at some point, or use some creative adjectives to do the work for me. Thanks for the constructive criticism
good story
"to a kiss (much to Rarity’s displeasure)." Jeez Rarity, that's a little cold
Red Eyes Black Dragon . . .
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