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Okay, I'm happy to see an update for this story. I feel curious as to why Celestia put a seal on Eris and how powerful she'd become after it got released. Likewise, I liked some of the other leaders like Shriek and the scene about mud walking/tailor was interesting. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
Nice Naruto reference, I just watched that episode the other day.
Well it's been three months since last time, but at least I can give this a proper review since I haven't been able to for a long time:
I'm guessing you loosely(and I mean loosely) based these sisters on Ruby and Yang?
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Not to mention that she's a changeling, so you never know when she's standing right next to you when you insult her.
Yeah I couldn't find any pictures of Eris in that get up. Ironically I found plenty of pictures of Trixie in that bathing suit, go figure.
I don't remember, but doesn't Eris know how to fly/hover?
Ahh, a classic Naruto reference. Man how many years has it been since that episode aired? I feel old now.
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Wait, so does Star Wars exist in this universe? How can something like that exist in a world that's basically Harry Potter?
Umm yeah, it's a masquerade party I'm pretty sure she can sneak in without anyone recognizing her(especially if she knows how to shapeshift)
Well that's not a good sign. Hours go by without any customers isn't for business.*end of review*
Well this was a great chapter, lots of talking but I'm sure action is right around the corner. I have no idea who those women are in your notes, so again I don't get the references. Hopefully it won't be another 3 months for the next one to come out.
Great to see an update. Interesting developments and background. Hope to see more.
Does he normally take weeks to make a new chapter?
7538337 Yes, sometimes months.