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OK, I was rereading to series when suddenly the new chapter is updated. Thank you very much. I enjoyed the duel between Trixie and Grey with so many references from Fairy Tail, Green Lantern, and the flame chidori from Naruto. I liked the part where Eris kissed him in front if the approving crowd and the flashback with Scarlet. I hope to see more soon.
My biggest problem with this chapter: It ended. The blessing and curse of this fic is that a 4,000-word chapter feels like a 1,000-word chapter; in other words, it feels too short. It's not rushed, has too slow of plot progression, or anything. It's just that it flows so naturally that I can read it fast, which means my enjoyment of the chapter ends faster.
ha, I got the Rwby reference with the briefcase. Who ever came up with that weapon deserves something. And again I must say this story needs a mystery tag for all those mysteries you wrote in. Like seriously dude I think you actually forgot a few. But that's probably nothing compared to twilight rage right now. You basically wrote him to be more talented than twilight. In the next chapter please write twilight to be crazy, like lesson zero crazy.please
Nice story progession, keep up this good work.
Good story.
Well, he just let two or so of his many cats out of his many bags. I can't wait to see the fallout of it.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Get shrekt Trixie! Wonder what Grey is going to do with her.
Geez, RWBY all day...
Can't wait for the next one
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Omg *bows* you sir are my hero
Write more and write it fast i just can't get enough *claps*
“Do not underestimate the Great and Powerful Trixie!” She stamped her foot. “I’ll have you know that Trixie is the strongest mage in the Zodiac guild!” Grey froze at the words and his ear twitched.
“Pardon me, but I don’t think I heard you right. Did you say that you’re the strongest mage in the Zodiac guild?”--------- Natsu talking to Fake salamander
“Anyone who messes with my guild better have their last will written.” ---------- Natsu threatening the fake salamander
"His right hand and forearm was wrapped in white flames"
"His right arm slammed into the shield------ Fire Dragon Iron Fist
These few quotes have Fairy Tail season 1 episode 1 writen all over it and i love it
5237310 Yeah, that's what I was going for. You'll see more crazy Grey later on.
5237563 HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT!?
5237755 I didnt realise it up until the end where Grey flashed her his guild badge, then i was thinking ive seen this before
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That sounds like fun, it would be interesting to see if anyone tries to blame his craziness on Eris influencing him
I hate it when my notifications doesn't always work, even with the upgrades, your stories sometimes still doesn't show it's updated. So I'm pretty sure you've been waiting for this, so time to give this chapter a long awaited review:
Well shit, you actually went with my suggestion. Didn't think you'd do it.
Ah, I quote I know myself as well.
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Ooh, what humiliating things awaits Trixie. I know he isn't going to do 'that'(they never do) but makes you wonder that what if maybe once in awhile they actually do do that?
I know has to be a reference to something, but I don't know what.
Well great, what's the point of you making him being all secretive and shit, if he's going to announce it to the whole damn school?(Practically a waste of time and effort.)
Well great again, Grey just announced to the school another one of his secrets. Now what's going to happen to him?*end of review*
Well this was bombshell to everyone. I've got to admit, this duel was nothing as I imagine it. I imagined it to be way shorter and more traumatic/humiliating to Trixie.(You lose points for that disappointment.) but on a positive note, I am more interested in Rose's story now(So you get points for that at least.) Let's see what you'll do next chapter.
5259439 HA! I LOVE RT!
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5259769 FREE EDGAR!!!!
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5263451 Ya.
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No...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5259821 the "I don't date guys with vaginas" quote.
5263921 Oh the AOT Abbridged thing. Yeah that's from that. I couldn't resist, plus I can see Eris saying that to someone.
Could use a bit more work in the beginning
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Woah, that was intense. Well now that I've caught up, I'm sad! I have to wait for more of this amazing story. Well, it's 3:53 on a school day so I have one thing to say... SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK!
<3
more please good author
5333296 heh. Look at past me, now it's 4:37 and still going strong :D
Love the zodiac guild and the badge is pretty sweet.