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Really loven' it soo far, keep up the good work. Quick question though how big is the harem, and are they all ready chosen or will thier be some sortof poll to choose?
well lets wait the unexpected from this fic
Good story so far. I like how you added Eris, and great job on updating quickly.
4106140 I am debating weather it will be 3 or 5.
The three have already been chosen and the other two are O.C's.
Well then that was... an odd occurrence. sorry to ask but when do you think another chapter for a story will be?
4106480 This story or another one?
4106500 is it too much to say both?
4106514 Not sure. I write when the inspiration hits.
I love how quickly you update the story.
I need more of this... I don't care what it takes... I'll ship myself in a box from England to your house, sit by your side and cater to your every need until you finish this story...
4107090 Easy there RD. I'm no Daring Do.
Aw goodie another chapter, Well lets take a look at this with a review:(I'm gonna put this in every review here)
Okay, I'm a bit surprised that the rest of the Mane Six are attending the university. I guess since this story is giving me a Harry Potter vibe I assumed that Starswirl University was the same as Hogwarts(or at least Celestia School of Gifted Unicorns.)
Whenever I'm thinking of scenes that will involve Grey going to Discords office I keep imagining this.
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I'm just going to imagine her like this.
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While funny and cliche, I would imagine that Discord would behind this(but of course it wasn't him.)
*bangs on door* ERIS!* bangs on door* ERIS!!*end of review*
Just like the title, first impressions are important when moving into a new place that's different from where your from. I guess it will take some time for Grey to adjust this new better lifestyle compared to his old one. I cant wait to see the comedy and drama of his first day of school.
4107463 Did not mean to put in the horse pun and yeah that's what I based Eris off of.
4107121 But.... I'll even spoon feed you
4110484 No thanks.
The first contact with RD and rarity seems familiar but still is quite awesome
Keep it up. But just so you know, once you've established your characters, you no longer need to refer to them as "the man" in the narrative.
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What, is your OC like a bad version of superman that's "stone cold" because he keeps getting friend-zoned due to his social awkwardness and obsession with his atheist-fedora collection? Edgy/Gothic OCs like those are completely overused and unoriginal, like the content on Reddit. If you're not under 13 then that's pretty pathetic. Please go back to Reddit and shit up a different website with your autism.
>inb4 'master trole XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD'
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4121793 Couple things.
1. I don't use reddit. (Never been to the cite in my life and don't plan to.)
2. Grey has in no point in the story (so far) tried to get a girlfriend.
3. Athiest fedora colloection?
4. He isn't a goth or socially awkward, I'm still flushing out his character! (Give me some time for Luna's sake!)
5. Honestly, using the term autistic is pretty damn pathetic in my opinion. Not to mention extremely offensive to those who are unfortunately afflicted with the disease.
If all you're gonna do is bitch and whine without contributing anything. The get the F*&% off my comment board and let those who have decent comments enjoy the fic.
This actually reminds me of a story I read a while ago that has since been taken down by admins. I forgot the name but it was Red something Academy the characters were humanized but were also in te human world. I was wondering if you know what im talking about and if you so if you drew any inspiration from it?
4140268 Red Thrush Private School. One of the best fics ever written, true it was humanized. I didn't really draw too much from it since it was a 2nd person fic, no magic existed and there was no harem.
4140406 gotcha. Just the whole set up. Especially with AJ and Rarity being roommates was really similar. Any way you got a fave from me
4141996 Thank you.
It's all so great :D
Now I'm just hoping that gray is OP,
Great. Another thing for Rarity to-
Would have been better if it went
Great, I wonder if Rarity could-
It would make it seem that he doesn't expect Rarity to be his personal tailor all the time. Specially if you want me to think that it was the first time meeting. We know what Rarity is like but Gray, heck for most of these characters for that matter, shouldn't.