Spike hasn't been very happy lately. After destroying his bed, Twilight decides it's time for a winter vacation at Sunset Lodge.
Things go well, until Twilight gets an emergency letter for help from Celestia. Twilight leaves Spike in the care of her cousin, one he didn't even know she had. Left with this stranger, his vacation takes a strange turn into a battle of romance.
This is not edited, so don't expect it to be perfect. Maybe I'll have someone edit it one day, but I can't get anyone.
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Don't worry about it dude. This is a pretty okay story. Though looks like RD is going to get a lecture soon.
one mistake i noticed
"embarrassed"
Not bad.
I am curious about what words, Spike, used though, or why they were directed at Twilight.
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Some backstory. I'm not repeating the words that come to mind
RD's in trouble.
Will you continue this?
4723609 I really don't know. I want to edit the next chapter, but I have other things to deal with.
When spike said "rainbow dash", I could just picture that one scene from a Christmas story. You know the one...
About the thing that says "need editor..." I would be interested, I would even work for free! I just kinda want a bit of acknowledgment so I can get my name out there as a fanfic editor.
4730224 if you send me the chapter, I could edit it! Free of charge!
I’d like to read this but it isn’t complete