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Minds Eye


Are you not entertained?

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Comment posted by Azreon deleted Feb 24th, 2014

Good story I initially stopped reading when the alicorn showed up but then I read the deconstruction and thought it was just great hope you continue this

Not bad at all. Though I wish Quick Post would actually be an alicorn, in the sense that he's just your run-of-the-mill unicorn with normal magic, only with the ability to fly. Or the usual pegasus with magic at his disposal, pick what you will.

Ah that bait-and-switch. Nice one Minds.

And now the girls turn on Tavi for not sharing her stallion after they were being dicks and she got a free pony ride......

You see what I did there? I made it funny because they're all ponies. And some people like to ride ponies, Not in that way but still. And if a pony gets a pony ride then it makes it seem like they're having- you know what. I ruined the joke now.
It's all your fault guys. Shoulda got it.
They bucked and rutted till they couldn't see straight and could taste colors.

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