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Zanem-Ji


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War has broken out through all of Equestria. Blood, fire, and destruction, cannot be healed by 'Love', 'Tolerance', and 'Friendship'. Twilight, desperate to end the suffering, wishes to turn her friends into Alicorns. She, out of all ponies however, should know that such powers must be earned, not just simply given. What happens when she turns a deaf ear to her friends, and makes a deal with a true god?

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Comments ( 11 )

First off.....ERMEGARD I LOVED IT
ahem
If this is a one shot I shall love it still bit should you get the chance write a full story to go along with this
Much hugs and much love to you great and mighty author!
-Dawning Dusk

You MUST countinued this piece!! PLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I am contemplating turning this into a full story. However, due to my job, I am always being sent into the middle of countries where I have virtually no access to a computer. If I do, the chapters may be VERY far between. But I do appreciate your compliments!! THANK YOU!!

This is awesome. I hope you continue this even if it takes a long while.

I think the personality of spike was very out of place. Bone the accepts instantly that twilight is sacrificed to couple bring the pony back as if nothing.

When is she the only friend that looks and feels the same pain she for the other ponies.

4002444 I uh...couldn't really make out much of your comment after the first sentence, so I will only respond to Spike's behavior. It's been 12,000 years since they left. That's alot of time for someone to change, and even though Spike and Twilight are friends, She is still the Queen and he still must listen to her as such.

awesome story, I might actually follow somebody

Wow! I hope you do decide to make a full blown story out of this. It was great.

this needs to continue. even just an epilogue would make me feel much better!

This is... spectacular work. Thumbs up. :twilightsmile:

It feels epic, even without knowing the exacts of the before and between. The concept of sequels interests me, but I think even a prequel would be an interesting read as well.

I suppose Twilight could always try to argue that they are "needed" now, since she needs them as friends? :unsuresweetie:

... H-how in the ever-loving- dude... you should make some sort of full blown story with this... not now, but maybe at a later date. I... I have no words to describe the perfection of a one shot you have made right here... just... how?

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