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Sidain


Just a guy that love a few things too much, drawing, videogames, music(dubstep), and now writing. Here we go

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I'm curious where this will go.

This is weird. A good weird, and hope you keep this going

You down play spike to much in this, spike should be quill and quill should be like spike, I just can't see spike being a pussy like he is now

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Calm down and read on. Everyone grows and so will Spike.

what's the plot of this story?

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:rainbowhuh:What...why...Son, your supposed to find that out yourself. There would be no reason for me to tell you the plot and have you keep reading, that takes the fun out of things.

YEAH!! Another awesome chapter :)

Riz

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So who's the ship ?

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Wolf and Blaze, if that isn't obvious now, and as for everyone else just keep reading.

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Yep, Wolfie and Blaze are definitely a couple---especially since they are expecting a cub now, thanks to chapter 1. :raritywink:

And like you also said, it's probably too early for other ships, but I'm gonna come out and predict that Spike's gonna have a bit of a crush on Lily. I don't quite know the age of Lily, so I don't know if that ship would even be allowed and not potentially pedo. Also, I can at least sense something between Obsidian and Gizmo (is that what that mare's name is?), but it could just be the brotherhood of the Royal Guard.

And I hate to say it, but I would not be surprised if Wolf has a little feeling for Quill. But right now, it's not gonna be a romantic feel for two reasons (well three): 1/ Wolf's spoken for w/Blaze, and Blaze is pregnant with his child (kinda reason 3); and 2/ Wolf could see a little bit of himself when he was growing up when he is assisting and teaching Quill on how to hunt. You could see that it's kinda like a father/daughter vibe going on. And in a way that same type of vibe could go in for Lily and Spike, a mother/son vibe that would be similar to what Spike had back in Canterlot w/Celestia.

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You sir, had just hit the nail with the biggest hammer in the history of hammers. Congratulations but don't think that I'm done with surprises just yet.

Looks like Spike is pushing past his own insecurities. Anyway you have a good story going here, keep it up.

Well, that was quick.....I thought that it would be Obsidian's crew to take flight at first light, not right after that meeting with other officials and Princess Celestia.

I also wonder if Celestia also accompanied the troop to the Everfree.

And as a bit of a observation: Quill seems to be catching on with what her element is, fire. She probably doesn't have the mental acuity of Spike, but at least she's willing to learn. We see this when she and Wolf are on hunts, and she seems to be more atuned to her draconic traits, despite being raised by ponies for most of her life. Whereas Spike seems to be more focused on the fact that he's not able to catch on things as well as Quill, but he have shown that he has advanced intelligence. However, the incident in the Canterlot archives is still a really hard pill to swallow. That event and the resulting fiasco just seems to be the proverbial straw that have broken the camel's back. I hate to sound like an asshole by saying this, but everyone else in the pack are saying it in one way or another: GET OVER IT. Spike has to let his new herdmates about why he and his sister are in the Everfree in the first place. Maybe once he finally owns up to it, it will allow him to be able to grasp things better and become more useful.

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You never cease to amaze me good sir. Don't worry about Spike, he will start moving on, but it'll be hard for him.

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Thanks, I'm trying my best not to be too lazy with this, but I am tell me and I'll stop myself.

You sir... need an editor. :facehoof:

I'm only a few paragraphs in to the first chapter and I'm being assaulted with grammar, word, and sentence errors.
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Time is something not all of us have Sargent.

I wonder what she meant by that? Isn't she immortal or is something going to happen? So are we going to see any SweetieSpike shipping?

Fucking AWESOME!!! an can you please have the dragons tell off celestia cuz I dont like her cuz she is being a bitch along with twilight :) lol

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Maaaybe, only time will tell.

Please have incest between the spikes please:twilightblush:

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I'm a little late, but I think Celestia is well aware that she, Spike, and Quill have exceedingly long lifetimes: Celestia, I have to believe she is immortal--she was there when Luna was banished for 1000 years; Spike and Quill, despite the fact that they are dragons, will eventually die at some point, probably centuries if not millenia in the future, if they are not slain by some idiot or accident first, but they will die.

Regardless of how aloof Celestia has shown throughtout this entire skirmish, you can tell in her mind that she cares deeply for what is essential her son and daughter, she feels remorse of how neglected all were to her two kids (both directly and indirectly), and obviously her motherly instincts wants her babies to eventually come home. Yet at the same time she knows that this was gonna happen--Spike and Quill had to grow up and fend for themselves.

Looks like Quill had seen what real action looks like and she just might try it out on somebody. So she swings that way or is she bi? Looks like Spike is done watching life fly by him and is living it now. So how are you going to pair up Quill and Spike with? In know there are some hints of incest but I don't want to jump to conclusions just yet.

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Spike and Quill? In a relationship? Ha, ahahaha...son, those two are like polar opposites, and the mere thought alone would be hard for me to stomach. Nah, no incest, but um...now this isn't planned all the way out, but...I may have something in store. Maybe.

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I DEMAND HOT INCEST ACTION, OR I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL DISLIKE YOUR STORY.

HERE IS MY ANGRY FACE

>:(

4064195 Trust me dude, it would be the weirdest hip here, you're talking to the dude that shipped Spike with Slendermane. But I'm grateful for no incest, I have nothing against it but I have no interest in it. Anyway I can't wait to see who you pair up with those two.

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Clam your flank down, I said I have something planned, but it'll be awhile OKAY?!:flutterrage:

4064665 Funny I'm getting hints of lily and spike. Along with quil possibly being with a threesome with wolf and blaze.

I wonder what is hold back Spike's power? I'm more of a fire and darkness guy myself but I understand that water can be really powerful if you know how to use it. And it look like Spike is stronger than he believes. Though Celestia's sudden change does raise a flag in my head, whether it's good or bad remains to be seen.

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Well, considering fire is most of the time related to passion, anger and such, Quill has no problem controlling her element. Now, water is related to calmness, precision, focus. Spike might be troubled by something, something in his mind holding him back, maybe that he is afraid of what he is capable of doing, considering the grow spurt he had.

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Good theory. I didn't think it was that much tied into each dragon's emotions---no wonder it looks like Spike does so well when it comes to meditation and other things that rely on focus (just like water-bending from Avatar/Legend of Korra). While at the same time it shows how much of a hot head--literally--Quill is, and obviously that fire can also be seen as passion

meh i always saw Spike an an earth or a metal dragon or a mage

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Yeah...that's the thing, the headcanon I build around dragons, and Spike forces for him to be of the water-element if his twin is of the fire. Rightfully speaking, I could had this go just about anyway anyone could possibly think of, but I went for the two most basic elements because...well you'll see soon.

...Okay, am I the only one confused here?:rainbowhuh::derpyderp1::unsuresweetie:

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Yes....:rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

But I bet that somehow, the same thing that happened to Luna, has just happened to Celestia.....with one unforseen twist--both her regal form and "Molestia" (her amorous form) are here in front of everyone, in the flesh....

So......WHAT IN THE HAY HAPPENED??!!!

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Don't worry you two, all will be explained in the next chapter, just when I get done writing the twenty chapter. Though, you'll most likely still be thrown as much of a loop as Obsidian and Sky, but trust me on this. You guys trust me right?:pinkiecrazy:

This looks pretty damn good. Ima read it once I get the chance.

Man, Celestia really dropped a pretty big nuke on there heads. I just hope she is willing to help them with Mia when the time comes. Interesting interaction between the Twins and Dusk. Though it does bring up the question why Spike's voice has been quiet for so long. And I can see that Spike and Quill are going to be real powerhouses one day.

dam it dude why did you haft to insult the wayvern

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Because, they're wyverns.

4108600 dude the traditional wayvern aren't that much different from European great dragons just slightly smaller overall has wings for fore arms, spits venom, biblical, and has a massive stinger like a scorpion at it's tale tip

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Oh...well my bad. I still haven't fully thought all of my dragon headcanon out just yet, so these things are bound to happen.

4109922 ahh... may i suggest reading the dracopedia

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The what a what now?:rainbowhuh:

4110992 the dracopedia ( an encyclopedia about dragons)

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Ah... I feel silly now.:twilightblush:

I can respect what you are saying more often you need a balance of mind and body in order to do this sort of thing.

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Why thank you, I try keeping everything within reasonable mind.

4116324 No problem and it does explain what exactly was holding Spike back in his powers.

quick question (which doesn't change how much I like the story because it's great), why do you leave italics on throughout the chapter? It bugs me. The story content is fine, but this little thing bugs me.

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