Ponyville lay still and quite bodies scattered all across the ground. Silent overcomes the small town, a chillness overtakes, every breath held, and all laid fallen. All but three...
Okay so this is just a quick little one-shot written for the Writer's Weekly Challenge from the Talkative Friends group. Feel free to point out any mistakes that (most likely) in the story. See you guys later!
Nice concept. Just work on your grammar and this story will be pretty good.
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Thanks!
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The lols the lols that was so funny I cant believe how the whole town got caught up in that simple bet cant help it I roled
Epic... just epic.
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Wow. Just wow Thanks a lot
I love PaintBall and i love this story
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Thanks for the love.
This was very good. I'm glad Spike won :)
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Spike always win.
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That is true good sir :)
Heh, nice fic ya got here.
Let's see 3/5.
Keep up the good work.
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Thanks, I try.
This story has been officially reviewed by the Blunt Reviews Group.
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Spike is badass, shame we didn't see the whole war, one would expect someone as crazy as Discord to be a touch opponent though.
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Aww, thanks for liking it. It was one of my first stories when I first started, and I've been thinking of doing a follow one up soon too.
I demand more awesome Spike but with a sword!