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Gold Cog


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Fantastic beginning! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon!

a place where all but the strongest survive.

You should replace survive with die, because right now, it means that the strongest die, and the weaker live.

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Thanks, I honestly read that over and thought something was wrong but I didn't know what. To be honest it was 3 in the morning when I wrote that.

Good premise dude, although I would find someone to proofread it first, Jesus Christ there's a few errors sort of... Everywhere.

Gotamn!!! I love this story, waited for an update, and now I get an even bigger cliffhanger! Why must you make us suffer so?

7170609 Glad to hear you like it, the next chapter won't take as long though I hope.

I love you and hate you. This chapter was great! Just feel sad that I'll have to wait a long time for more. Looking forward to the duel between Luna and Foster. I just hope he uses the booze like I think he will because if yes, then it will be epic!
Go mighty fist of the keg!!!

When I saw the title this song came to mind:

finally started reading this story and binged the whole thing at once. am LOVING it so far

7620773 Glad to hear you enjoy it!

At long last!!! You live!!!
Welcome back and a great chapter as always.

7806807 College is a pain, especially for a mechanical tech. But over my break I'm gonna try and put more focus on writing, I miss it.

7808442 mechtech? Cool! Looking forward to some crazy projects!
I know its asking a lot, but make it your goal to make a handheld rail gun, that would be sooo cool!
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Ya know what they say, bitches love cannons.

7808608 Ha ha, I wish but I won't be doing anything like that for while. I'm mainly in repair at the moment, may as well learn how to keep things we already have working or no on else will. My class is sadly small with only 7 people, it's a shame more people don't like to learn more practical skills.

Gotta work on the grammar, it's out of place on several spots.

And that's all that was wrote.

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