Equestria has been partying harder than ever before! Why? A new alicorn has been crowned a Princess of Equestria! Who? Why it's the Ponyville town booze hound, Berry Punch! What? Exactly what I just said! How? Now THAT'S the question, isn't it!? Thus begins the telling of a tale! The Tale... of the Berricorn!
Thanks to the artist sourced through the image! They're brilliant, inspiring this fic. They are just starting a little comic based on the same thing (albeit, different origin story), and I may have borrowed their idea for Berry's alternate Princess name.
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This was quite the tale here my friend
Like + fav
It deserves its own, developed, 100k words long fic. Maybe its own Berryverse even!
And then Berry became Dionysus, god of wine.
3967431 nyes, quite
3967931 why thank you, good sir.
3968361 that is a better way of putting it, yes
Fantastic. I loved it. I have no complaints, so you can keep doing stuff like this, yeah? You're a great person.
~ Decaf
I just wish you would get around to helping with my story at some point in the near future...
I like this. Three things:
Personally, I'd go easy on the exclamation points in the story description.
I'm pretty sure this deserves the "Random" tag.Derp, it has it.I'm guessing "gone" is a typo?
Have a great day!
4788938 just gone a certain hour means the first couple minutes past that hour
lol, I love Berry Punch.
This felt a bit rushed 'n stuff, and there were some odd line choices I felt that deflated the humor toward the end. Still grinned though.
5956788 admittedly, it was one of those spur of the moment fics. I'd like to hear anything specific about humour deflation so I can learn for future occasions. Glad you liked it overall though. Just gonna say you might be interested in The Rock, The Dress and The Unicorn. Mainly because it was another spur of the moment (even more so than this one, being done in a single night before i disappeared for a weekend) and I'd like to hear your opinion on it.