After the loss of his own world, including his memories, Dominique Guillory is asked to assist in saving others from the same fate. By the very person who was meant to protect his. With the need for a new home, he accepts, if only temporarily.
Sent off in a random direction through the space of parallel existences, Dom arrives in Equestria under the name of Omni Chrome, where he immediately encounters the threat he was foreworned about, as well as those he must protect.
Unused to such a burden, he makes mistakes that may be irreversable, friends who may help, and makes bonds that may have to be broken.
NOTE: First publicly submitted work. Got other ideas but chucking this one out into the forefront to test waters and improve writing style.
[Edit]: Removed a couple of tags. They may return if the need arises, but I doubt it.
being new to this site, i dunno how to do that thing when you direct the comment at someone, so here's to hoping you see this Jonblu11:
The gramical errors are one thing I am slightly ashamed of, but seeing as I don't have any people to do the checks before hand it's hard, plus I did chapter 2 without the help of Office. With the fast progression, I wasn't aware of. If you could maybe go into a bit more detail with that, I'd be 'mighty greatful'. Danke Schoen
Added to watch list. I don't usually read HoE but... you've twisted my arm.
This is quite good! You're actually pretty talented!
1093282 I wouldn't say talented (certain english teachers would preferably say "not right in the head"), but moooooorrrree... narrow minded... i think? I'm a mathematician at heart but also put in top set english when younger, much to my chagrin. Hated the subject. Too many rules. My imagination was and still is like Harry Houdini. This piece of attempted literature is more to subdue my constant need to self insert mary sue the whole thing. I do it so much in my head when I love something like a fic or series, that I made a back story to make it all fit together in a not so all together way. That's Thunder's origin (can you guess the reason behind the name?).
See, I did end up reading some of your other stuff. Good, but there are a few errors, one of which I would like to point out. Delete the first he of paragraph 2. That is all. Oh, actually, good job.
1177757 done and danke
This is really good. I like odd fics such as this, as well as HIE stories that are not cliched. Well done.
This is good. You wanted a new name, so here it is: Displaced and Desperate
Because he has been displaced by certain events and is (in my headcanon, at least) desperate to do something about it (I know I would be, anyway).
Yeah? Yeah? Maybe?
Tell me what you think.
~ Decaf
3940536 names were to be suggested on the blog...
3941066
Ah well. I'll put it there if you want.