Have you ever wondered how dubstep was invented? Well if you say that the only dubstep you listen to is Skrillex, I will punch you in the face! But seriously, this is the story of how dubstep came to Equestria.
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sounds awsome , im tracking this, oh and , First
....wat
HECK YAH!
I loved it, I don't read many comedy, but this is an exception.http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Friendship+is+still+magic&hl=en&biw=1069&bih=578&gbv=2&tbm=isch&tbnid=WhOVz2fpQ3zqSM:&imgrefurl=http://skaijo.deviantart.com/gallery/&docid=G9QYib7PFDKooM&imgurl=http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/150/f/2011/240/0/9/so_many_friends_by_skaijo-d4843wf.png&w=150&h=88&ei=4VdsT_-ICYTj0QGQ-eXVBg&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=149&sig=106626288392924289802&page=2&tbnh=70&tbnw=120&start=18&ndsp=23&ved=1t:429,r:11,s:18&tx=105&ty=18 HECK YAH FLIPPY! SO MANY FRIENDS!
I only like skillex dubstep, ia this bad?
loved the Skippy referance. i LOL'd as soon as i read the skippy part
I'm on my phone now so I can't do a proper review, but I had to tell you the only part I actually laughed out loud was when derpy said "I dropped the bass." Other than that great idea for a comedy! I'll review once I get on a computer.
356561 It's not bad. i like Skrillex myself but he is not dubstep. He is more complextro and DnB. All the guys that think they know "dubstep" listen to Skrillex and call all of my dubstep shit. That's all.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Gb3faOzvBk
and
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u0t8ZIlwuQ
are REAL DUBSTEP!!!
356670 i think skrillex is more brostep then dubstep plus his new stuff is shitty, father said was pretty ok in my book though
Now THAT was filthy. A-men, brother. A-freaking-men.
LOL at Derpy's line
Drop all the base
You do realize that Equestria has toilets though right?
358565 outhouses yes but indoor plumbing no. Therefore when the bass hit earth it would probably destroy those and send its contents flying through the air.
358621That's so...filthy
358629 Just how dubstep's suppose to be.
356525
*I'm tracking this''
>>Pineapple Crush ooook, and why you telling me that
Theirs just so much more like Skorge, NJlegit, Dead mau5 I could go on and on
356615 Oh, Whoops!
Honest Review Time!
So here we start off in your Humor story with its first attempt at humor...
"After never realizing it, she traveled across the plains of Equestria. She sped past Marizona, Las Pegasus and even past Trotorado. She traveled across the globe, even expanding out of Equestria and into neighboring countries like Equinland and Cantertica. She was gone for months but was determined to deliver the package safely."
While i applaud your effort, it simply felt like a forced joke. Maybe you could have liven things up like telling the reader what she did in the other parts of the world, Talk about how she changed the lives of other people in different lands by giving subtle references to other stories. Like you could have had a Fallout Equestria reference with her flying by a desert wasteland with ponies fighting. Or you could do something more sneaky like saying she saw a Glowing city underwater. Make the reader see small references like that and it become enjoyable to try to figure out what came from where. After all this is a Comedy story so not everything has to be canon.
"Off she went, to the moon." I giggled.
"“You have no idea how happy I am to see you! You see I- wait how are you breathing without a helmet?” Derpy shrugged and stared back at Vinyl nonchalantly." More of this! Its the small stuff that make me laugh.
"...blasting Luna to the dark side of the moon." See!? Small stuff make me giggle.
"“What did you do?”
“I dropped the bass.” " Again the small things win.
"“Man you guys are filthy.”" I see what you did there, and i approve of it.
Final: Overall it was not bad, you got a few giggles out of me but nothing that caused me to stop reading and breath. I suggest reading This and This.
Notice they have a lot of character interaction in them. Humor is best served with friends so try adding more talking and more characters.
So Bravo and Encore my good sir! Good luck with any future Humor stories you could possibly write.
Edit: RIGHT before i posted this the site goes down....