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Great! But I hope you will include pegging too, in the next chapters... or maybe a little futa
Seems like it just cuts out in mid sentence at the end.
This scene was a little bit all over the place. She kind of rushed through the hypnotic commands, it felt. Hope to see her take worse and worse advantage of him in further chapters, though.
3954904 Oops, so it does. Fixed, must have accidentally the copy/paste oops.
I'll try restrain myself from publishing new chapters at 5:30 in the morning from now on, I could just as easily chopped off more than a word and not noticed. Re. the hypnosis, I felt in earlier drafts (those two I threw out to start over specifically) that it dragged on a bit long, and while I could easily write a pure hypnosis, no-clop chapter, I like both the challenge and slightly prefer the outcome of trying to mix the two. It's a pity I missed the mark here a bit, but I think I'm still happy with the chapter overall.
3954325 I'd actually like to work in futa, so you might just see that. Pegging, though, is one of the few fetishes I don't have, so I'm not sure I could write it well.
As always, thanks a bunch for the feedback, and while I do have a road-map the substance of upcoming chapters is still unplanned, so I'm open to suggestions
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Cool. And since you added crossdressing, what about some M/M action? Maybe with some royal guards, or changelings?
Story is falling apart a bit. Here's hoping She fails and some revenge with a permanent residency will happen. For now.
Hypnosis...
3955579 when is more comming out
It's very very very good!
Any chance for more stuff like this?
Update?
I hope you will update this soon
A classic... TWT