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Oh boy, a SoulHook story. I can't wait to see when it starts getting fucked up.
>anthropomorphic universe
No
>rape
Yes
1916529 We all know that feel
Damn that was the best gift ever
lol I had voted for this one XD
I knew I wouldn't be disappointed by this ^_^ awesome work as always Soul!!!
Maybe it's because I love chrysalis but no just no
Ok I'm not sure if anything god apple bad nugget in biscuit ERROR ERROR Nuroimplants malfunctioning please wait for reboot of mind
(Skip to 6:40 end after house burns down)
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=xTsmHOjtA9s]
Reboot complete
I can't even!
King Lazaro Sol of Ziolia
[the vid didn't work so here's a link to the vid Error video
I approve
1916529 a moderator is commenting on my story... woaw...
Amazing. Magnificent idea, wonderfully executed. Plus, this is the first fanfic I read where Chrysalis is the one being raped. For that alone I congratulate you.
I only have a problem with Shinning's incredible stamina. Who's this guy? The pony incarnation of Hercules or something?
That and I have no idea what was the point of the prologue and the epilogue. I mean... Why do we even need them?
1919318 Shining Armor is Shining BUCKING Armor, man! He's captain of the frigging guards, of course he has to be incredible!
And the prologue was more or less solely just to let my OC's be in it since I've never written them as anthro characters
Well...that was just as horrifying as I thought it would be. Oh why didn't I follow the "don't like, don't read" policy like I should have?
1919331
Shinning Armor is a bland character with no personality what fo bucking ever, that the writers decided to pull right out of ther asses, even though he could have been easyly introduced to the cast in more than 10 episodes prior the season's 2 finale...
Yes I do %$! hate that guy. And as a matter of fact I brutally killed him in my story.
But never mind. Your story is awesome, and even though exaggerated, the super stamina thing really helped the rape atmosphere.
Dear sweet Celestia that picture... that fucking picture... It is the hottest pony picture I have seen in my history as a Brony.
Have a follow, like and favourite.
Very Nice story.
1919571 ty
1919528 ty
Well this was fucked up...
Still, it was a good story so...
Thumbs up from me
1919718 le thank you
1919660
You need to make more of this story!
It (In my opinion, which I respect) is the best clop fic out there.
Each part of the story is fairly well written. The sex was graphic without reverting to silly porno-cliches and it was nice that you blended the charackters thoughts into the sex as well.
Pretty strong value dissonance between Prologue/Epilogue and the story. By telling us that rape is never right, yet letting the main charackters get away with (and being happy with it), you pretty much send the message that Equestria is a crapsack world, where horrible people go by unpunished.
Or I'm just overanalyzing and you simply glued a badly fitting "rape is bad"-message onto the story to ease morale backlash...
Also the transition in writing style, from the prose-heavy intro, to the graphic sex scenes is pretty jaring, and makes both pieces (again) seem very disjointed.
Though the events that transpire within this story are, in usual circumstances, horrible, my undying hatred of Chrysalis made this a perfectly enjoyable piece. Well done.
1919817 It's a one'shot so I don't know... maybe I'll be so boring I make a sequel to this for each Christmas that passes like TFS does with the Hellsing OVA anime during each Halloween
1919833
Or at least more clopfic stories with anthro Chrysalis.
I mean, jesus tapdancing christ that picture and the story.
1919828 LADIES AND GENTLEMEN! Someone figured out the moral of this story in less than twelve hours after publishing
!
Honestly, it's people like you that makes me wanna be moralistic and add little hints through the stories I write.
And ty for your opinions
Wow. I for one am a fan of Chrysy and Shining. This is a very good story, and I would imagine after release she would crawl back to Shining and Cadence and beg to be taken in as a sex slave, as she is no longer fit to rule. All of my thumbs, all the way up.
Man I have a huge rape fetish now.
Okay, I don't plan to read this story, so I will not downvote it. I am not here to talk about the story itself. I am here because your tags are wrong.
While its not on the list of conflicting tags, a story involving kidnapping and rape should not be tagged slice of life. Thank you.
1920071 I'm glad you're not downvoting it. However, I'd like to point out the following:
Minding this story has 11000+ words in it, you can't predict how much of it is "slice of life" and/or "dark".
I will spoil the story by saying that the first 5k words of this story is about nothing else than the relationship between Cadence and Shining Armor, while the remaining words are practically just sexual.
What I'd love to point out even more is that every author has a style of his/her own to write a story involving several different genres. Have you never read a story about a persons life being dark and awful? If you go deep into this person's life and it contains dark-genre things, you can't deny it has Slice-of-life AND Dark in it.
TL;DR
I suggest you read the story anyways and try to keep an open mind to its content. You should never judge the book by its cover.... and that's the entire point to why I'm writing at all...
Okay, I normally avoid anthro. Big believer in either go pony or human but trying to do both... yeah. But fair enough, let's crack this sucker open.
You seem to be using a framing device here. I will not comment on it, since I assume you've used it in other stories.
My first problem with the story, the premise. Rape is a crime. It's not something you do to a prisoner to punish them. But I've seen worse. Moving on.
So we start off light and fluffy. Snow on the ground, children baking, Cadance watching it all. Good interaction between the couple. The sex is fairly vanilla, newlyweds and all, not bad.
Turn back now, Cadance. So far you have been very in character. Just stop. You can do it. You are an alicorn. Stop in your tracks.
Cadance.... Wat are you doing?
Nothing good will be found in a holding cell... Cadance.... Stahp!
Yes, that's right. Now express your pity for the prisoner. Maybe tell her she's a bad pony/person (this is why I don't like anthro, you cross the streams and the terms get inconsistant), then leave.
Oh shit, look at that boys, Cadance has left the building. She was teleported out of the room and replaced with Princess Kadenz, the Princess of rape.
And let's see... you'll forgive me for not going line by line here... Kadenz apparently is a bisexual. Okay I'll allow it. Oh, why are you taking the gag off? In what way is listening to the evil overlord a good idea? She will use the only weapon left to her to hurt you.
Yes that's right folks, Cadence has a rape ray. Get your keyboards ready, let's see those stories.
Yep, your body now reacts despite the will of your mind. You are caught in her Genjustsu.
Hey look! It's Shiny Chestplate! And he likes rape too! Also murder!
So yeah... I didn't like this. And its not because it's rape. Twilight's Midnight Violations has done rape far more realistically, and in character. That's the problem. Past your light and fluffy sections your Candance and Shining are no longer the ponies we started with. Up to the point where we enter the cell it is slice of lifey, fair enough. But past that the tone shifts so drastically it may as well have been another story. This would have been a better story had you split it into two one shots; the first one ending with Shining and Cadance making love.
Final verdict:
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>rape
>slice of life
I like this guy.
Well screw you and you anti migration theories because rainbow dash is best pony and can kick your ass with her 300 confirmed kills so HA
Another rapefic featured?
i would only like this story if didnt include and wasnt so cruel to chrysalis i'm sorry but i have to give this story a dumbs down
Perfect ^^
Though now I'm curious to see what would be shining going all out
Btw, we all knew you weren't dead.... You are too evil to simply die like that
(we all know that evil people goes first)
Very nicely done.
You've written fine piece here.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Cadence Presents: The Best Possible Thing (If You're Into That, Like 94 People Are)
And my question is this: Why does a popular fanfiction get a ton of attention on FIMFiction, yet only two or three reviews on FanFiction(dot)Net?
Dat cover art.
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Interesting... Rape content = Instant featured... very interesting...
Ahem, To Put it kindly... fuck no.
to put it rudely?
fuck nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... probably cause i've read stories where chrysalis becomes an admirable pony and because this is some fucked up rape.
First of all, I must say, this was....strangely pleasant. Yet, it is also gruesomely cruel here. I am truely at a mix on whether this is truely something that I would approve of. To say that you ACTUALLY have me at a moral crossroads is quite a feat in itself, you should know. Not a whole lot of stories can actually make a person start to contemplate their own moral values like this has. Add to that the use of metaphors and similes, if a bit excessive in few places, though depicted and used with a superior flair, adds to the collective grandeur that your tale has collected. I do say that I must give credit where credit is due.
Well done sir. Have the coveted 'stach award. Two, I might add.
It isn't often I gives these out, nor is it often that I give out a like, so feel free to smother yourself in delightful boasting. *tips imaginary top-hat off*
Not many fics around here actually make me THINK or evoke ANY type of emotion besides just me still being bored while alleviating some of my boredom. (In other words, most fanfics I read just flow, they are nice in idea enough to read, but they aren't engaging enough to bring forth emotion or make anything really compelling, therefore I feel that only those that break the mold deserve something of merit.)
My mind, heart, conscience, common sense, and morality are saying "No," but my dick is saying "Yes!"
Have a fave, thumbs up, and a stache.
1920797
Nothing like logging on and looking for what
qualitygarbage has managed to make the feature box. Before this it was the terrible 'Futashy' verse story.Yeah, something is fucked up in the algorithms.
This is weaksauce rape. BUT, aside from some writing issues, it was enjoyable.
1921503
Hah! Vanilla nubcake.
Guess what time it is!
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Seriously though, while well written for the most part, rape is a special kind of evil, and I kind of like Chrysalis, so sorry, but I'm going to have to downthumb this. Causing boners does not necessarily make for a good story regardless of success in the endeavor
Oh great, START THE RAPE TRAIN EXPRESS!
1921780 i'm not a nub. i went on 7chan's /be/ board. ALL the pages...
Bloody good story, I give a thumbs up. But I just dont like rape fics without a squeal or more chapters to where the victim learns to cope. (Lets be clear im not hating on your story) Especially the Queen. I couldn't help but feel sorry for her.
*Reads the description and looks at the cover image*
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*Sigh* Fine, you successfully piqued my interest. The writing is good, although I feel it delves a bit too far into the vulgar terms for actions/body parts on occasion. The premise... the premise is so twisted that is honestly made me question where us humans are headed as a species. Then I remembered that this is the internet and everything was okay again. The characterization was so broken and so far out of left field that I was in the wrong stadium.
Overall, definitely not my cup of tea, but I can see why some people would like it.
What I would like to feel for a Shining Armor X Cadance X Chrysalis fic
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My actual reaction.
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Still, you have acquired my attention.
Use it wisely.
Epic story bro
My thoughts as I go:
7 hours, holy hell. No wonder he was able to land a princess.
Castle dungeon - ever the epicenter of royal romance.
There are some verb tense issues that make the dungeon scenes a tad hard to follow. A bit of grammar, nothing dire.
Chrysa-bitch got smacked! Woo!
Shit. Cadence is a Confessor - kinda. Surprised I haven't seen that connection before.
This is surprisingly well written in most places.
I'm kind of expecting Shining to pop in at the end with a big ol' "WTF Cadence?!"
Pronouns are tricky in some paragraphs.
The opening and epilogue make this whole thing feel like one of those weird fantasy porno flicks with the dreamy-weavy transition screens.