I am here to write. Maybe clop fics or romantic, if you just want to judge me for the clop, just don't read them.
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If anypony wants to help me, how do I add a story to a group? Could somepony explain that to someone new to the site?
4653043 are you part of said group? If so just hit the button with the folder
Good story, even for being as short as it is. WIth the next chapter, if you decide to make one (seems to me like you will based on the ending), take your time and give it more details and whatnot.
Applejack should be first, why? Three reasons, first Sweet Apple Acres is a bit secluded, second AJ would likely understand Twilight's dilemma, and finally, AJ is the strongest of her friends. If this is going where I think it is, take down the toughest opponent first.
Please don't make this one of those stories, that gets abandoned, before the really good parts
This is like when a druggie says:"I can fix this on my own!",no,Twilight,you can't...
Absolutely let the boys get in on the fun! Shining Armor would be the supportive big brother, Spike the adorably naïve yet helpful little brother, and imagine if Big Mac breaks in on Twi raping Applejack...
But, actually... why you gotta go rapey? Why not just fun futa sex?
flutterrape time
i wish for the boys to be left out thank you. By the way can't for the next chapter.
The idea of guys being in on this fun... doesn't sound like Twilight will be forcing her dick into them, sounds more like the other way around, dood.
I say leave them out, dood. But that's just me.
You seem to be dealing with a spelling correction program that isn't fully with you. I recommend going back and fixing the times it played a prank on you.
Also, twilight seems to go from her desk to her bed without any narration of doing such, this should be remedied.
Are we talking about devil's threesome or futa on male?
Devil's threesome, maybe, if you want to have a size envy story in there and can pull that off
Futa on male, probably no but your choice
Not a lot of good Futa on male stories. Would like to see you attempt it at the very least. Bottom Spike and Sub Shining with cadance 3some soiled fun.
But that's all up to you.
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What he said. Also, you could stand to break up the paragraphs more often, as you've got a bit of wall-of-text going there.
That said, I will certainly be watching to see where you take this.
whenever i see the word decent i can't help but just start playing this in my mind.....
Next!
Please do more!
I do hope more comes for this one, it looks real promising.
Wonderng if there would be any more
(Cleaning out Read Later, this has been sitting since July)
I'm curious as to how you can tell.
Brah!
This is good so far. The only thing that really stands out as an issue to me is this "experimentation" was far too short. maybe draw it out with a few more rounds with herself before she actually starts finding help.