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Bakmah Genesis
Insanity is only those of the vivid imagination
Bakmah Genesis
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I can't get over the rampant lesbian offspring thing. Pacing is too fast to get invested in any of these events. Resounding "meh"
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I can't help to chuckle while looking at your username and comment. Good job
It was fine, but there was a few issues like twilight not being an Alicorn.
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That's not an issue especially if you take into account the wonderful AU tag. Obviously, she doesn't become an alicorn.
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It'll go through a rewrite, trust me. 99% of my oneshots do.
I assume this is a method of discharging writer's block so you can get your flank back to working on Of Stars And Hearts.
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"Quality over quantity."
For such a short story, you sure did got your points across. I don't know if my feels could've handled a longer story.
you sir have excelled
Oh hi feels didn't see you there. Make yourself at home.
Oh, damn. Right in the gut.
Im crying right now. This fic was both beautiful and sad and you captured the feelings in it in a way to bring about the sadness and beauty of love and loss. Author, I thank you for once again giving me a reason to love the world and live life to it's fullest.
Damn. When you mentioned Trixie was pregnant and a death I assumed the baby died; then BAM!, dead Twilight. And after the reminiscing, we jump forward sixteen years to a now single (I think?) Trixie, with a teenage daughter who has raging hormones...or whatever.
Oh and apparently Sweetie's sister is actually her mother. PLOT TWIST!
You have made me shed manly tears of feelz
I'm a real sucker for Twixie stories.
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Came back to this story after awhile and saw this comment. That was rather selfish of you sense you don't seem to understand that many of the authors have other things they want to get done as well as having a life outside of FiMfic, school, college, bills, family matters, jobs, the things that lead to procrastination is in plenty, as welll as the author not sure how to continue something or fretting over it. Don't be so quick to judge unless you stepped in the author's shoes and seen it through his/her eyes.
such a wonderful story. it compelled me to finish it. the feels were intense. just the way I like them.
I am confused about the descriptions' wording. the description sounded much more depressing than the outcome of the storys' premise. Trixie seemed to have survived better than the description indicated. is Trixie concerned about their daughter contracting the same disease in a hereditary fashion. it sounded like Trixie is studying the disease for a specific reason. who is the new element of magic? I believe the story needs to be renamed. this seems to be more of a slice of life type of story, than the dark story that the title, and story itself indicate. there are also some questions that were not addressed in the story, that should have been expanded on to fill out the the storys' premise.