• Published 12th Mar 2014
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Not All Bad - Tessa



The mane 6 find a female changeling who is pregnant and injured. They help her and find things that they didn't know about the changelings.

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Dear Princess Celestia

Chapter 6: Dear Princess Celestia

"I think you need some rest Amy. You look tired." Twilight said helping Amy get to her bed.

"Y-y-yes. *Sniffle* I think that's a good idea." Amy said wiping tears from her eyes.

"What do you think girls? Should we tell Celestia?" Twilight asked her friends.

"Yes. Then Amy will find a good home and will be happy." Fluttershy said a bit sadly.

"Ok then. Spike, time to write to Celestia." Twilight said to her friends then to the little baby dragon.

"Ready when you are!" He said prepared to write the letter.

"Dear Princess Celestia, We have found a changeling and have been helping her. But do not be alarmed she is not like the others. In fact we were quite surprised to find that! Apparently there was a civil war between the changelings. Some of them wanted to solve their problem diplomatically, and others wanted to do things the way they did in Canterlot. Amethyst, the changeling we found, was a supporter of the ones who wanted to sort things out diplomatically. Her husband was also a supporter of this. Though soon after they found out that Amethyst was pregnant he died fighting in the war. Her heart was shattered when she heard this news. I suppose that when she found out this news she fled to find her husband as she did not wish to believe that her husband was dead. Amethyst has taught us many things about changelings we did not know already. And she has been an amazing friend. With this I have hope that we will be able to make peace with the changelings and find Amethyst a home. Sincerely, Your ever faithful student, Twilight Sparkle." Twilight said pacing. And with a breath of green flames the letter was gone.

Comments ( 4 )

4083730
*Sigh* They did hesitate a bit. Also :yay:! She was the one who said they should.

4083744 I meant more than a few sentences. And wouldn't Flutters be too scared too speak? Rainbow Dash would protest a little more. Rarity would be disgusted. Applejack would be angry. Pinkie would be Pinkie Pie. And Twilight would be alarmed. They were not suspicious enough. They didn't debate about it enough. They were too quick to help a changeling. It has promise. But is rushed and the characters are OOC. Sorry if I'm too harsh.

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Umm... one Amethyst does have a back story. (See chapter 5) And two I've seen all the episodes -Somepony to watch over Me. Also this is just a little bit after the wedding.

Can you update please? These chapters are short and I want to see what happens.

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